Choose Me (2/2)

Sep 11, 2012 12:34


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parisgal3 September 11 2012, 19:43:32 UTC
Oh well that was just the perfect ending!

Many thanks for continuing to give us Jack/Liz fic!

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md123 September 11 2012, 19:49:25 UTC
I thought this would be a crowd pleaser! Thanks for reading!

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noie84 September 11 2012, 20:33:19 UTC
Lovely! I must say, also, I love your writing style - concise, but still full of emotion and humor. Enjoyed this very much.

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md123 September 11 2012, 20:35:55 UTC
Thanks! I've recently re-read a few old fics that really get into Liz's internal monologue, and after seeing what a tough act that was to follow, decided to do this one from Jack's perspective.

I find writing-style comments particularly useful/complimentary.

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keenrevel September 12 2012, 07:19:01 UTC
This was awesome! After reading fanfics for years now, this is the first time in a long time that I wasn't able to predict the ending when leading up to it! AWESOME job! :)

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md123 September 12 2012, 17:50:44 UTC
Thanks! Glad it was a surprise!

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demilybones September 12 2012, 23:04:02 UTC
I agree with keenrevel - I love an unpredictable ending, and I did not see that coming.

I remember you said you kind of struggled with this one, but it came out wonderfully.

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md123 September 12 2012, 23:11:42 UTC
You're late! ;-)

I'm glad it worked for you. In fact, I initially composed that last scene as a downer ending (Liz would totally go and get married secretly to avoid the confrontation), but realized it would work much better this way!

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demilybones September 12 2012, 23:15:40 UTC
TELL me about it. Who knew college was actual work? *exhales in an annoyed fashion*

Yes...though I typically ship J/L, this ending was not at all sad.

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md123 September 12 2012, 23:17:22 UTC
Wait... it's clear to you what happened here, right? She picked Jack!

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purpleeater1 September 16 2012, 20:47:34 UTC
That ending was the best. My heart seriously dropped.
Wonderful job, AS ALWAYS.

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md123 September 17 2012, 00:15:52 UTC
Thanks, as always. The nice part about having so many angsty or friendship endings is that this surprise really works.

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