Thanks! I've recently re-read a few old fics that really get into Liz's internal monologue, and after seeing what a tough act that was to follow, decided to do this one from Jack's perspective.
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This was awesome! After reading fanfics for years now, this is the first time in a long time that I wasn't able to predict the ending when leading up to it! AWESOME job! :)
I'm glad it worked for you. In fact, I initially composed that last scene as a downer ending (Liz would totally go and get married secretly to avoid the confrontation), but realized it would work much better this way!
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Many thanks for continuing to give us Jack/Liz fic!
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I remember you said you kind of struggled with this one, but it came out wonderfully.
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I'm glad it worked for you. In fact, I initially composed that last scene as a downer ending (Liz would totally go and get married secretly to avoid the confrontation), but realized it would work much better this way!
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Yes...though I typically ship J/L, this ending was not at all sad.
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Wonderful job, AS ALWAYS.
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