FAIL
Okay, I had to screenshot this, then post it. Because, honestly, you don't get much dumber than this.
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Wanna know the clincher? When the fic actually starts, and the dialogue begins, there is interchanging dialogue (two characters share the same line of dialogue even though they speak separately. In writing, characters that talk get their own line every time they speak).
But, seriously...this guy or girl is boasting an "A" in advanced Literature class, and an "A" in Speech, and doesn't know the difference between "its" and "it's"? How dumb can you be to post your grades to boast like that and then display such an obvious amount of failness in terms of grammar? Not to mention writing style, since the person didn't follow the rule of "when a character speaks, they get a new line of dialogue".
...wonder if Failblog would take it...cause this is some major fail.
(author name and story name edited out to protect the author)
Wanna know the clincher? When the fic actually starts, and the dialogue begins, there is interchanging dialogue (two characters share the same line of dialogue even though they speak separately. In writing, characters that talk get their own line every time they speak).
But, seriously...this guy or girl is boasting an "A" in advanced Literature class, and an "A" in Speech, and doesn't know the difference between "its" and "it's"? How dumb can you be to post your grades to boast like that and then display such an obvious amount of failness in terms of grammar? Not to mention writing style, since the person didn't follow the rule of "when a character speaks, they get a new line of dialogue".
...wonder if Failblog would take it...cause this is some major fail.