Comments | mdfargo: (Untitled Horror 1) Chapter 3

mdfargo

(Untitled Horror 1) Chapter 3 - The moments after

Jul 23, 2005 10:24

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poeticserenity July 23 2005, 15:44:40 UTC

So far so good .. did i mention my job insults my intelligence?

mdfargo July 23 2005, 16:50:29 UTC

No you did not, are you on messenger?

poeticserenity July 23 2005, 16:59:00 UTC

no can't get it at work this is my only communication at the moment

mdfargo July 23 2005, 17:01:43 UTC

So what is it of this work that you hate?

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ymf July 23 2005, 16:51:46 UTC

this is getting interesting. d=

PS. be careful of your too's... you spelled a few as "to". d=

mdfargo July 23 2005, 17:02:44 UTC

I so hate those minor spelling errors that spell check does not pick up on because they are really correct words. ~grmubles~.. Blah. ~L~

I am glad you are liking it.

ymf July 25 2005, 10:47:27 UTC

haha yep. hmmm i'm a bit of a grammarian at odd times d=

mdfargo July 29 2005, 23:38:32 UTC

Nothing wrong with that.. correct away... you will have no problems with me.. ~L~... I know I am not perfect, far from it even.

athenatecho July 23 2005, 17:19:18 UTC

Ohhh good!

mdfargo July 23 2005, 17:21:26 UTC

So you like?
How about the addition of Jamie? I think she is like an anti hero so to speak, you never see any chapters in books that are down on their luck and just a step away from living in a carboard box.... I thought that needed to be changed, make someone that matters be someone that society might figure did not matter.

athenatecho July 23 2005, 17:23:19 UTC

oh oh yeah Jamie is like someone old friends I have lost touch with so I can really see her in my nind good work

mdfargo July 23 2005, 17:25:00 UTC

That is what I was trying for... a real person a down to earth person.

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aryadna July 24 2005, 01:59:49 UTC

*Squeals* You're killing me... But, at least death is grand. As promised, I'll start proofing sometime tonight. Where do you wish me to send the proofed stuff?

mdfargo July 24 2005, 02:00:43 UTC

I do not mean to kill you, I have to think on the proof destination.....

aryadna July 24 2005, 02:38:26 UTC

Go ahead and think. *Laughs* Its going to take me at least two hours or so to proof it. And my deaths are not lasting. Something always brings me back ( ... )

mdfargo July 24 2005, 02:42:30 UTC

You really never have to submit to make it how you want it you just need to have enough faith in your work is all. As long as you love it and believe in it that is all that matters, if others do then so be it and if others do not so be it, just stand by your work and it will be judged on its merit. Even if you do not make it the first time, you can make it the next. Never give up, that is the call of a winner.

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mybluerose July 24 2005, 02:48:17 UTC

It's looking good Frank. *smiles* I like how you break the chapters into parts. Wish my church had a hollowed-out statue though... that would be wicked cool to have in a chuch. (guess I'd have to go to a church with statues though, or even go to church for that matter)

At least creepy guy has a name, though I'm wondering now if it is his real name or not. Jamie is a nice addition too... you wouldn't think that Gina would have a friend like her. She sounds like the kind of friend that wouldn't let someone feel sorry for themselves, will be interesting to hear what advice she gives Gina.

And Tim.... *lol* I can see him clear as day.

Shit man... this would make a killer movie. I mean it honestly. Then again, i really like this sort of stuff. I really liked this chapter actually. Got me waiting to read more man.

mdfargo July 24 2005, 02:50:05 UTC

Thanks for liking it. I am glad you enjoyed it, hey, are you on Yahoo if so message me.

mybluerose July 24 2005, 02:51:40 UTC

I only have AIM sorry... *chuckle* Will chat with you here though... y'know.. help your stats.

mdfargo July 24 2005, 02:52:31 UTC

okay annon of the masses. ~LOL~

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