Comments | mdseiran: [FIC] One More Night

mdseiran

[FIC] One More Night

May 01, 2007 20:04

Title: One More Night
Fandom: Gakuen Heaven
Warnings: Slash, PG-13

- For 15pairings, #6 resentment

( People often asked Naruse who his first love was and were always surprised when he said he didn't have one. )

gakuen heaven, fic, 15pairings

Comments 13

lyntek May 1 2007, 17:42:10 UTC

You made me like Naruse D: (PANKS!) XD

Very nice fic, I like how you did Kazuki especially ♥ Love how you made such a crack pair (in my head anyway XD ) work so well <333!

Plz to keep writing! (nudges toward Kaoru~)

mdseiran May 1 2007, 17:45:49 UTC

It's good that it works well in your head b/c I still can't see it in mine. 8D

Am saving Kaoru for last k. :X

cassiopia_star May 1 2007, 17:55:12 UTC

ooohh, I can't wait for the Kaoru one :P

mdseiran May 1 2007, 18:40:46 UTC

xD Not sure when that one's gonna get written.

sayora347 May 1 2007, 20:49:33 UTC

Waaah! Naruse-kun! I loved teh fic but T__T Just when he thought he'd found true love!

mdseiran May 1 2007, 22:27:23 UTC

xD Since it's Naruse he'll survive. Am glad you liked!

animegoil May 1 2007, 21:53:58 UTC

Wow, yeah, first off-- crack pair! ^_^ But it turned out great, and it was very interesting to see how their personalities fit perfectly here. You had Naruse down-pat ♥ The ending tie-in with Keita was -great-, cause it gave a cooler reason for that little hapenning in the series.

mdseiran May 1 2007, 22:28:24 UTC

Thank you, am glad Naruse turned out okay since he's one of those characters I find hard to write. ^^

kagayachou May 8 2007, 17:10:56 UTC

I'd thought it'd be interesting if there had been something between Kazuki and Yukihiko, so that it'd make sense how 'in your face' he'd been with Kazuki in the anime. Thank you very much for showing me different way for it to be possible. The writing was a pleasure to read, and tugs lightly at the heartstrings.

mdseiran May 8 2007, 19:24:06 UTC

Thank you, I really appreciate the comments. ♥

The anime is what makes this fandom so optimal for ficcing isn't it. xD So much left unsaid.

And, *cough* b/c I am so way behind can I just say that I utterly love your fics? I've read the GH ones and a few of the Ouran ones you wrote, just didn't get to comment on them. ^^;

kagayachou August 5 2007, 04:41:09 UTC

Late reply, but yes, the anime makes it so easy... (and the game, oh the game).

And the funny thing is I love reading your fics too but I never got around to friending you. *does so now* There we go XD

Meanwhile, let me add this fic is a pleasure on reread as well ^_^