Remus/Regulus for kyfairie

Oct 14, 2007 23:12

Title: Good with the Bad
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Underaged, dub/non-con
Request: Regulus/Snape or Regulus/Remus, "Aware of an unrequited infatuation for his brother, Regulus decides to take Slytherin advantage of the situation. I would love for this to be both fun and mocking, and for both parties to be aware of Regulus’s duplicity in his actions."
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kyfairie October 17 2007, 15:30:56 UTC
This wasn't too dark at all. It was wonderful! Regulus was just right in his anymosity toward his brother (and toward Remus, who he knew was pining for his brother; though he didn't seem to understand that Remus was aware of the Black streak in Sirius... so he didn't know that Remus understood Reg more than Regulus would probably like.)

Remus' responses were also perfect. His longing and his trepidation - towards both Sirius and Regulus: the one brother that he wanted but has lost faith in, and the other bother that he can have but has no reason to trust at all.

Thank you! *grin*

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romaine24 October 18 2007, 02:52:38 UTC
Very Dark, very nice. Even though Remus was the one being abused, it really came through that he knew both Black brothers better than they knew themselves. I really enjoy explorations of Regulus' characters. In addition, it was really quite novel to see Remus and Sirius being antogonistic with each other.

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dulciloquy October 21 2007, 02:44:29 UTC
Oh, that's really interesting. Although he acts so cool, Regulus has a bit of a brother complex in this, doesn't he...

I'm so glad you picked this up ♥. I really can't thank you enough.

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