Oh. Just...oh. I love this so hard I barely have words. Beautiful story, and scorching hot sex, and I think possibly I imploded a little from glee. Excellent work.
Ohmigosh! I fixed it! As you can probably tell, that scene used to be slightly different. I know my awesome betas caught that, too--and I STILL missed it. Eep! Thanks for pointing that out, jeez.
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Thanks for reading!
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Poor Lorne, having to keep all that inside. *woobie*
(Small pick: Next to Radek, McKay makes a sound that might be approval. He had just gotten off the phone with Rodney who was in Colorado.)
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And also, thank you for reading :)
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