FIC: Past and Pending; AU Lorne/Zelenka; NC-17 [3/3]

Feb 03, 2009 09:50

Title: Past and Pending (3/3) [AU]
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Evan Lorne/Radek Zelenka
Summary: Radek finds Evan Lorne under a tree. A love story.

Part 3 )

my fic, lorne/zelenka, fic, past and pending

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scheherezhad February 4 2009, 14:06:21 UTC
Oh. Just...oh. I love this so hard I barely have words. Beautiful story, and scorching hot sex, and I think possibly I imploded a little from glee. Excellent work.

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meansgirl February 4 2009, 22:26:48 UTC
Eeep! Thank you so, so much!

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half_elf_lost February 4 2009, 15:52:24 UTC
Lovely work. I didn't know where you were going to go with it, and it had a beautiful flow to the story.

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meansgirl February 4 2009, 22:27:45 UTC
I didn't know where I was going to go with it, at first. This was originally going to be a less-than-2000-word one shot!

Thanks for reading!

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meansgirl February 5 2009, 20:37:59 UTC
Thank you, love! <3333

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reginagiraffe February 5 2009, 18:45:56 UTC
Fantastic!

Poor Lorne, having to keep all that inside. *woobie*

(Small pick: Next to Radek, McKay makes a sound that might be approval. He had just gotten off the phone with Rodney who was in Colorado.)

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meansgirl February 5 2009, 20:37:43 UTC
Ohmigosh! I fixed it! As you can probably tell, that scene used to be slightly different. I know my awesome betas caught that, too--and I STILL missed it. Eep! Thanks for pointing that out, jeez.

And also, thank you for reading :)

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sihayab February 6 2009, 03:20:48 UTC
Wonderful!

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