Know that when i winch, i'm only ridding myself of the poisin in my mind

[meant2last4ever]

hey. i had a weird day. i didnt really feel like doing anything. or talking to anyone. then liz called. and she told me to write. i decided to write about goodbye. so i did..you dont have to read it. i really dont care if you do or not. but its up for anyone who does.

Comments

[cherryst_salsa4]

Whoa...that was really beautiful :)
I liked the vivid imagery and the descriptions and everything...
"scented with heartaches and ecstasy."
"he would take a five year long, and still going, trip to the grocery store."
"An infection spreading throughout the place she once called home. Her revenge. Her thoughts. Her pain. Her sweet corrosive goodbye."
Wow...keep writing!!

ps: I love candles too :)

[meant2last4ever]

woah you actually read it!! thanks bingg!!!!!! you rock

[waterybuttcheek]

jesus jen.

find a god damn publisher.

i dunno why but this sentence got me: "A film of the day her father decided he would take a five year long, and still going, trip to the grocery store."

intensity man. you mastered it. we should have writing sesh. i'm really into poetry now. we gotta get them laptops.

[meant2last4ever]

aw thanks becca :) im so happy you guys actually read it

dude put some of your effing poetry up! us writers have to share our work AT LEAST with eachother!!! yea...def laptops on my next spending list! they're moving down to like 500$ its amazing

[jollygreenpear]

JENNIFER!!!

y-y-you bring tears to me eyes!!!

[meant2last4ever]

aww ILY joliee! ♥

[rebanana]

I read it. Why wouldn't I read it? I love your writing, and that actually means a lot coming from me, because I am very critical when it comes to writing, because it is something that lies close to my heart.
I could really connect with it, and sometimes I feel that way. Sometimes when I'm alone, and everything comes back to me, memories of the past, and images of the future...
Today I'm in an emo mood so... don't mind me, but I honestly did love it.
We should definitely do the starbucks idea sometime.

[meant2last4ever]

thanks that means a lot :)
im glad you liked it
ahh ilyy beccaaa bg!

[rebanana]

ily too jen.

[meant2last4ever]

aw do you reallly?

[acdcmusicfreak]

I was like that today too. Then I went to a school dance.

[meant2last4ever]

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