Comments | med14: If It Makes You Happy {pt. 2}

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If It Makes You Happy {pt. 2}

Jan 18, 2014 18:46

He doesn’t see Andy for a couple of days after that. And it’s stupid because it’s exactly what he’s been asking her to do… take the hint. Move on.

Except now that it looks like she’s finally listening to him, well… he kind of wishes maybe he had been a little more truthful with her and with himself. Because the further away she gets, the more ( Read more... )

fic: rookie blue, andy mcnally, sam x andy, rookie blue, sam swarek

Comments 5

rbraquel January 19 2014, 04:45:30 UTC

OK you two... I feel like we need a sequel to this. Andy running over to his house and them actually saying the words that both have been frightened to say (Sam most of all).

But I loved every part, even the parts where Sam is being an idiot and sabotaging his happiness.

papaki88 January 19 2014, 06:40:21 UTC

I loved it! But it was cruel to end it here! Sam almost died, and he still didn't realise that he wasted so much time?
I really hope that sam won't push andy away in s5. I think that andy will be skeptical and sam will be the one who will fight for her.
Anyway, great story as always!!

Beautifully Written mahtra January 19 2014, 19:10:23 UTC

I think you two should do more together! I loved your collaboration so much. After I read it for the first time I just went back to the beginning and started again. It was that great!
I liked what you did with Sam's distorted reasoning and how Andy didn't let him push her away, yet was giving him his space.
And then Sam gets book recommendations from Izzy. Not to mention Dov's interesting selection. (And you actually managed to make me not hate R.M. Rilke for a while there. I think it's the first time since my high school teachers stopped torturing me with him...)
Really, you did an amazing job and I am very happy, that your muse has found you again! I'm very much looking forward to see more of your writing.

shnallylou January 21 2014, 04:29:56 UTC

Okay, I read part 1 and didn't realize you 2 did a part 2. Cuz I was a tad depressed after part 1 and thought it couldn't end like that. But with part 2, I LOVE IT.

Sam telling her to get. out. is how I kinda see him acting (I do go the other way with Andy avoiding him and then I think fields of daisies and everything will be right with them right away--which I know, not these writers' M.O.s).

And his make believing with Marlo, which I GET his game, but like, when are the writers gonna make things up to us, ya know?

Love the bits with Dov and Oliver and Izzie. Andy being real with him is good...she needs to be sometimes. And Andy meeting Sarah and stressing happy and dropping off food. Sam just knows, he knows her and yes, Sam YOU ARE GOOD ENOUGH FOR ANDY. You make her happy and she makes you happy. Your lives are richer with each other.

I like what was going on in Sam's head here.

Both of you did a lovely job with this and anytime you 2 think you should team up to write, DO IT :D

sm_chick January 28 2014, 06:59:28 UTC

Gah! I finally got the time to read these. The angst in the first one...I can't. But then it's so good, that I couldn't stop either. As usual, you wrote GREAT stuff for all of the characters you included, not just Sam and Andy themselves. But of course you did a fantastic job with those two stubborn idiots as well. So thanks for putting your talents together to write this.