fic: And Then Relief

Mar 30, 2011 11:50

Title: And Then Relief
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1, 184
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Summary: John nods, his nose brushing against Sherlock’s arm from the movement, and he closes his eyes around the feeling. Everything is drowsy and slightly callous, muddled in his mind and across the space between them (metaphorical and literal). John doesn't like it when ( Read more... )

character: sherlock holmes, character: john watson, pairing: sherlock/john, category: slash

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jcrowquill March 30 2011, 23:08:35 UTC
This was really sweet. I liked your visual details and the mood you conveyed through small touches. Very lovely. :)

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mediumofsound March 31 2011, 00:03:10 UTC
Thank you very much! I appreciate hearing that. C:

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jerel March 31 2011, 00:44:37 UTC
Very nice! I like the tension but also how it then all just drains away. Like sugar melting. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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mediumofsound March 31 2011, 21:42:01 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! Melting sugar. I really like the way that you described it. (:

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lavvyan March 31 2011, 19:35:41 UTC
Ah, this is lovely. A bit ache-inducing, but sweet all the same.

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mediumofsound March 31 2011, 21:42:52 UTC
Thank you for saying so! :D

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shortcrust March 31 2011, 20:34:55 UTC
Gosh, this is lovely. The detail is very charming! :)

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mediumofsound March 31 2011, 21:50:48 UTC
I appreciate that! C: Thank you for commenting.

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slashfairy March 31 2011, 22:49:34 UTC
John nods, his nose brushing against Sherlock’s arm from the movement, and he closes his eyes around the feeling. Everything is drowsy and slightly callous, muddled in his mind and across the space between them (metaphorical and literal).

He can feel the energy draining from Sherlock’s body, slowly, sluggishly, draining and then sinking into the sheets. It provides extra warmth for them and John rests his head against Sherlock’s ribs, basking in it. He likes to be clever, really, he could almost drown in it, but the raw feeling he always gets when Sherlock praises him is more than enough to make up for the bitter nights of Sherlock’s moods.

*hearts*

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mediumofsound April 1 2011, 18:48:45 UTC
Thank you~ <3

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