When You Smile

[meg22591]

Fandom : The Manchurian Candidate
Pairing : Raymond/Eleanor
Rating : PG-13 for this chapter, it will most likely go up later ;)
Warning : This story contains incest. If that freaks you out, turn away now. Read at your own risk.
Disclaimer : None of these characters belong to me, just the plotline sadly :(

Comments

[katherinepend]

So I've Written This Comment Four Times, And I Still Can't Find The Words To Express How Freaking FLAWLESS This Fanfic Is!

I've Had A Really Lousy Day, And This Fanfic Just Made It Not So Lousy <333 IT'S LITERALLY LIKE, SO SO SO SO SO PERFECT!! And You Write The Characters So Freaking Bang On! I Could Just *See* This Happening In The Movie <333333 GAH <333 SO.MUCH.LOVE FOR THIS FIC!! I Cannot Freaking Wait For The Update! <33333333 Now I'm Going To Go And Read It Again <333333

[meg22591]

I am just totally shocked by how you responded to this! My eyes were getting wider and wider the more I read! Lol I think it's far from perfect, and writing their characters isn't so hard, but I don't know anything about politics so the technical stuff might be wrong in future chapters, but I'm just really glad you liked it. I need a story line though. Think I should stick to the plot of the movie? And YOU better be gettin your butt in gear and posting something too! We're both proving that we're pretty good writers and I think we could use each other as motivation to write and post haha Anyway, so glad you liked it so much :) Makes me happy

Meg <3

[katherinepend]

LOL, Well We're All Our Own Worst Critics. I Happen To Think It's Seriously Amazing <333

YOU AND ME BOTH! I Know Nothing About US Politics. All My Info Comes From The Internet LOL. So I Never Know If It's Right. I Think Sticking To The Plot Of The Movie Sounds Awesome <333 Going Outside The Movie Would Be Awesome Too <333 Either Way It's Gonna Be EPIC <333

And It's SO Funny You Should Say That! I Literally(Just Before I Got This Comment Notification) Just Posted A Short Little Drabble Called "Hidden" Over On My Journal XDD I Really Need To Post Longer Stuff XD

[merylthebest]

This is a very good fic please continue I really love it!