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[megaman_steve]

Bleh. Im bored at school right now, not doin much, jus on AIM chattin wit Mariylin. Jus wrote sumthin in creative writin I figured I'd share on LJ. Teacher asked us to write about what our New York is, i mean what else could I write about?? Anyway here it goes, its jus the first page but I want opinions

Comments

[_keta]

<3! Well written and nice. calling the city the 'concrete jungle' is very overused though.

[child_of_pain]

Its good to know your still in school and not wasting away, theres not many people i'd give the time a day to. But know your not become a failure is cool, normally i wouldn't care if you were someone else. Just letting you know i'd help you if its in my power.

Wow school is actually teaching!?!

[shank_rob]

good grief you can write megs.....now you gotta teach me.....I'll trade you math :-)

[dolla_sign_clap]

Nice work El Greco. And yes, concrete jungle is over used but it will never go out of style IMO.