a/n: italics are thoughts as usual and also including lyrics this time :) written in OOC-view, is it right?
this chap is inspired by f(x)’s chocolate love, preferred their electronic pop version compared to SNSD’s retro one. because I am too cool for retro~ ok just kidding! but either ways work well for my fic and it’s highly recommended to listen
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If I were Jinki I would go with Jonghyun, because...just because. LOL, yeah Jinki listen to Jjong. If someone were to pop your cherry let it be him. :D
WOOHOO, THE BEACH!! I LOVE THE BEACH!!! <333
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was too busy editing the post that i forgot...
uhuh...do you know why he is death? *innocent eyes*
i wonder too~~ kekeke =l
because you're "j" biased xDDDDD
aigoo...you're just as much as the perv i'm making jjong! *head desk*
must have got influenced by you too much...
i love the beach too!!! but it'll be up next week :D
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There is a reason why he is death? Are we gonna have like a story of their lives or something. I mean so we can get to know them better. :3
Yes I am "J" bias in general. :D MWUH?! Me a perv?! What do you mean by that dahl? Im not a perv like Jjong. D:
Its good to be influence by me though...
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“Jinki-ah, don’t ever do it with him alright? If you’re gonna pop your cherry, I should be the one doing it for you,” Jonghyun said, turning his pout into a brilliant grin before pulling Jinki up from his seat, announcing that it’s breakfast time.
I LOL-ED HARD
OMG IT'S SO SWEET YET SO CRACKISH I SO TOTALLY SEE JJONG SAID THIS!
and no unnie, jong cant sprout fire, he's a dino, not a dragon XDD
I LOVE ALL THESE LOVES FOR LEE JINKIIII
*huggles*
i can totally see the threesome smut... onew squished between jong and key...
*drools*
and taemin is such a cutie......
LOL tihs fic unknowingly sounds like lucifer, i want to suggest the title to be changed but of course, that would be too cliche so yeah, dont change the title XD
i think juliette was horrid until lucifer come... i mean, i approve the fashion but damn, what with the hair ._.
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too awesome for anyone else xD
jinjja? he's one who loves to pop others' cherry...i'm making him sound so perv now D:
great that you LOL-ed hard, or else i would slap you hard enough to make you lol and lose your mind >:] just kidding~~
lee jinki deserves the love~~~~~ *wiggles eyebrow*
i just told umma no smut for this fic! why must you!!! ugh!!! *breathe fire*
taemin's always a cutie~~
jinjja? did i wrote it the wrong way? but it(fic) came out before any of the teaser........
umma read one of my old plots...it was really named lucifer...but i gave up writing it...totally lost my muse for that...*sigh*
if i were to release that fic now, it WOULD definitely be very cliche...
lol!!! the hair! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *laughs forever*
but i still love key's...and his keybrows are just smexy! i'm gonna trim mine to that shape xDDDD and...
WHAT THE HELL TOOK YOU SO LONG!!!!!
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not to mention my sore throat because of screaming. damn i love korean gathering
AND WHY NO SMUT?? YOU HAVE THE ONKEY SMUT GODDESS AS YOU SISTER!
/shot and mutilated by onkey fans
I LOLED AT YOUR ICON STOP MAKING ME LOLED XD
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i don't know how do described it but I found so funny and hot at the same time key's scene XDDDDD
and jjong is so cuteee i was just imagining him when he saw the other two so cute ~~ I can't even tell properly I just love him ~~ and with onew~~ /i can't believe i just being biased over jjong in this story, and I don't ever know why XDD
anyways little jinki XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
so key is death and tae is an angel
i can guess minho is devil and jjong is demon? but he is too cute for be evil T____T XDDDDD
i don't know but somehow i want onew to go with jjong XDDDDDDDDDDDD
*end of spazzing* lol
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did you *ahem* "imagine" it xDDDDDDDD
key's just love~~~ to seduce jinki....in which jinki is a major loser in not being able to do anything against him than gasp > <
you're supposed to be onew bias right? kekekekekeke! i converted you~~~~~~~ >:D
lil jinki, i didn't mean to harm him that way...he was scared shitless and nearly got a boner D:
uhuh...well~
read on~~~~ muahahaha! it isn't fun if i say everything out isn't it?
wouldn't cute people be cuter when they are evil? :D a major cutie like me is very very evil too i feel like puking after saying that...*sick*
awwwww~~~ more jongyu lovers i see~~~
i love them too ♥
*end of word vomitting*
ppyeong~~~ *insert magical effect here*
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i hate lj at the moment. because it wasn't notifying me that you have posted a new entry >=(
i was thinking "where did unnie go? i haven't heard her in so long?" and when i decided to visit your page, i see two new chapters ;A;
fail. mianhae, mianhae~!
this will be a long comment. so bare with me ^^
CHAPTER SEVEN MADE ME ROFL!!! the way you describe jonghyun made me giggle. big nostrils and all. astro boy with big nostrils?
haha sorry can't get that image outta my head XD
AND JINKIMAN GOT HIS FIRST KISS FROM JJONG!!! can i say that i'm very jealous of jinki? hahaa!!!
how could you not forget to mention chicken as well XD
now on to chapter 8...
“Beautiful girls, all over the world, I could be chasing but my time would be wasted. They got nothin’ on you~~ baby, got nothin’ on you~~ baby~”
I LOVE YOU UNNIE FOR MENTIONING THIS SONG~!
AHAHAHAHA JJONG IS SUCH A COCKBLOCKER LIKE ME!!! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I CAN HONESTLY SEE THE FIRE COMING OUTTA HIS NOSE AND ALL XDDD
oh Key you sneaky one!!!
“You‘re so mean, he’s still ( ... )
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p.s. been your silent reader. -____-
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*bone crashing hug*
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ you for telling me!
MUACKS!!!!
i would! ^^
i promise it would be updated once a week, preferably thursday/friday!
so don't runaway from me!! comeback and read more ok? :DDDDD
♥~~~~~
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hell yea, i so want jinki to go with jjong. really love the part when he interrupted key with whatever he's doing. HAHA. the angel, devil thing (i think taemin's an angel here, not so sure with the other three) sort of reminded me of their mv teaser, lucifer. XD
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he has really great timing to stuff like that...
it does? i wonder which lucifer were they depicting...
there's like 4 or 5 meanings to that...aigoo...
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the guy with large nostrils loves to poke his nose into onkey's business...
that explains the size of his nose opening....
it's alright, there's onkey, jongyu, now i'm waiting for ontae and onho lovers to bombard me...
thanks for reading bb ♥
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