destiny...(8/?)

Jul 16, 2010 05:16

a/n: italics are thoughts as usual and also including lyrics this time :) written in OOC-view, is it right?
this chap is inspired by f(x)’s chocolate love, preferred their electronic pop version compared to SNSD’s retro one. because I am too cool for retro~ ok just kidding! but either ways work well for my fic and it’s highly recommended to listen ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13

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bunni102 July 15 2010, 22:38:15 UTC
SPOT FOR ME

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bunni102 July 15 2010, 22:43:59 UTC
MWUHAHAHAHA! Jinki almost got rape by Key. So Key is death huh? So from what i know so far taemin is the angel, Key is death. I wonder who are the rest?

If I were Jinki I would go with Jonghyun, because...just because. LOL, yeah Jinki listen to Jjong. If someone were to pop your cherry let it be him. :D

WOOHOO, THE BEACH!! I LOVE THE BEACH!!! <333

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meggayi July 15 2010, 23:10:46 UTC
omo! I FORGOT TO SPOT FOR YOU GUYS! OMG!!!!!! MIANHAE UMMA!!! i'm so uber sorry!!!!
was too busy editing the post that i forgot...

uhuh...do you know why he is death? *innocent eyes*
i wonder too~~ kekeke =l

because you're "j" biased xDDDDD
aigoo...you're just as much as the perv i'm making jjong! *head desk*
must have got influenced by you too much...

i love the beach too!!! but it'll be up next week :D

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bunni102 July 16 2010, 00:05:26 UTC
LOL, Awe, kwechana jung-ee dahl. Im still first so yeah Im cool with that. :D

There is a reason why he is death? Are we gonna have like a story of their lives or something. I mean so we can get to know them better. :3

Yes I am "J" bias in general. :D MWUH?! Me a perv?! What do you mean by that dahl? Im not a perv like Jjong. D:
Its good to be influence by me though...

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meggayi July 15 2010, 23:11:26 UTC
spot for mel my dear lil' sistar! i forgot to spot for the famz and now i'm spotting for you xD

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yuei_vuisaki July 19 2010, 04:19:34 UTC
JONGHYUN IS SUCH A COCKBLOCK

“Jinki-ah, don’t ever do it with him alright? If you’re gonna pop your cherry, I should be the one doing it for you,” Jonghyun said, turning his pout into a brilliant grin before pulling Jinki up from his seat, announcing that it’s breakfast time.
I LOL-ED HARD
OMG IT'S SO SWEET YET SO CRACKISH I SO TOTALLY SEE JJONG SAID THIS!
and no unnie, jong cant sprout fire, he's a dino, not a dragon XDD

I LOVE ALL THESE LOVES FOR LEE JINKIIII
*huggles*

i can totally see the threesome smut... onew squished between jong and key...
*drools*
and taemin is such a cutie......

LOL tihs fic unknowingly sounds like lucifer, i want to suggest the title to be changed but of course, that would be too cliche so yeah, dont change the title XD

i think juliette was horrid until lucifer come... i mean, i approve the fashion but damn, what with the hair ._.

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meggayi July 19 2010, 11:22:36 UTC
he's a brilliant cockblock alright!
too awesome for anyone else xD
jinjja? he's one who loves to pop others' cherry...i'm making him sound so perv now D:

great that you LOL-ed hard, or else i would slap you hard enough to make you lol and lose your mind >:] just kidding~~

lee jinki deserves the love~~~~~ *wiggles eyebrow*

i just told umma no smut for this fic! why must you!!! ugh!!! *breathe fire*
taemin's always a cutie~~

jinjja? did i wrote it the wrong way? but it(fic) came out before any of the teaser........
umma read one of my old plots...it was really named lucifer...but i gave up writing it...totally lost my muse for that...*sigh*
if i were to release that fic now, it WOULD definitely be very cliche...

lol!!! the hair! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *laughs forever*
but i still love key's...and his keybrows are just smexy! i'm gonna trim mine to that shape xDDDD and...
WHAT THE HELL TOOK YOU SO LONG!!!!!

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yuei_vuisaki July 20 2010, 03:51:39 UTC
LOL I SLEEPOVER @ MY FREINDS HOUSE UNTIL MONDAY AND I SLEPT LIKE ALL DAY ON SUNDAY OKAY! WHEN I WOKE IT'S ALREADY MONDAY AND I WAS LIKE WTF?!?!?
not to mention my sore throat because of screaming. damn i love korean gathering

AND WHY NO SMUT?? YOU HAVE THE ONKEY SMUT GODDESS AS YOU SISTER!
/shot and mutilated by onkey fans

I LOLED AT YOUR ICON STOP MAKING ME LOLED XD

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meggayi July 15 2010, 23:11:44 UTC
spot for dongsaengs!

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chunonew_rx July 16 2010, 01:51:00 UTC
this chap is HOTTT ~~ i loved it ^^
i don't know how do described it but I found so funny and hot at the same time key's scene XDDDDD
and jjong is so cuteee i was just imagining him when he saw the other two so cute ~~ I can't even tell properly I just love him ~~ and with onew~~ /i can't believe i just being biased over jjong in this story, and I don't ever know why XDD
anyways little jinki XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

so key is death and tae is an angel
i can guess minho is devil and jjong is demon? but he is too cute for be evil T____T XDDDDD
i don't know but somehow i want onew to go with jjong XDDDDDDDDDDDD
*end of spazzing* lol

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meggayi July 16 2010, 10:23:39 UTC
really? *wiggles eyebrow*
did you *ahem* "imagine" it xDDDDDDDD
key's just love~~~ to seduce jinki....in which jinki is a major loser in not being able to do anything against him than gasp > <
you're supposed to be onew bias right? kekekekekeke! i converted you~~~~~~~ >:D
lil jinki, i didn't mean to harm him that way...he was scared shitless and nearly got a boner D:

uhuh...well~
read on~~~~ muahahaha! it isn't fun if i say everything out isn't it?
wouldn't cute people be cuter when they are evil? :D a major cutie like me is very very evil too i feel like puking after saying that...*sick*
awwwww~~~ more jongyu lovers i see~~~
i love them too ♥
*end of word vomitting*
ppyeong~~~ *insert magical effect here*

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soulfulxdreams July 22 2010, 00:14:55 UTC
UNNIE~!
i hate lj at the moment. because it wasn't notifying me that you have posted a new entry >=(

i was thinking "where did unnie go? i haven't heard her in so long?" and when i decided to visit your page, i see two new chapters ;A;

fail. mianhae, mianhae~!

this will be a long comment. so bare with me ^^

CHAPTER SEVEN MADE ME ROFL!!! the way you describe jonghyun made me giggle. big nostrils and all. astro boy with big nostrils?

haha sorry can't get that image outta my head XD

AND JINKIMAN GOT HIS FIRST KISS FROM JJONG!!! can i say that i'm very jealous of jinki? hahaa!!!

how could you not forget to mention chicken as well XD

now on to chapter 8...

“Beautiful girls, all over the world, I could be chasing but my time would be wasted. They got nothin’ on you~~ baby, got nothin’ on you~~ baby~”

I LOVE YOU UNNIE FOR MENTIONING THIS SONG~!

AHAHAHAHA JJONG IS SUCH A COCKBLOCKER LIKE ME!!! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I CAN HONESTLY SEE THE FIRE COMING OUTTA HIS NOSE AND ALL XDDD

oh Key you sneaky one!!!

“You‘re so mean, he’s still ( ... )

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hiswhitelies July 16 2010, 10:18:32 UTC
i so love this fic, pleaseohplease write morrrrre. XD

p.s. been your silent reader. -____-

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meggayi July 16 2010, 10:25:28 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~~~~~~~~~~
*bone crashing hug*
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ you for telling me!
MUACKS!!!!
i would! ^^
i promise it would be updated once a week, preferably thursday/friday!
so don't runaway from me!! comeback and read more ok? :DDDDD
♥~~~~~

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hiswhitelies July 17 2010, 01:53:06 UTC
“Jinki-ah, don’t ever do it with him alright? If you’re gonna pop your cherry, I should be the one doing it for you,”

hell yea, i so want jinki to go with jjong. really love the part when he interrupted key with whatever he's doing. HAHA. the angel, devil thing (i think taemin's an angel here, not so sure with the other three) sort of reminded me of their mv teaser, lucifer. XD

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meggayi July 17 2010, 11:38:04 UTC
xDDDDDD he so should huh?
he has really great timing to stuff like that...
it does? i wonder which lucifer were they depicting...
there's like 4 or 5 meanings to that...aigoo...

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meggayi July 16 2010, 13:57:36 UTC
awww~ don't be sad *passes kleenex*
the guy with large nostrils loves to poke his nose into onkey's business...
that explains the size of his nose opening....

it's alright, there's onkey, jongyu, now i'm waiting for ontae and onho lovers to bombard me...
thanks for reading bb ♥

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