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dineshakb February 27 2010, 17:07:45 UTC
now i really enjoyed that....you did an amazing job on this hun....

lmao at sasuke being a pot head...shikamaru was perfect as vizzini and gai was just meant to be fezzik

i was glad to see you added ibiki in there as well...giggles...you cant have a torture without ibiki being there....
He doesn't quite have the victim mentality I enjoy so much." shudders...oh yes...that sounds like the ibiki i love...giggles

and the bickering between jirahya and tsunade...lmao...too good
"I'm not a witch, I'm head bitch!" lmao...that is so a tsunade saying...lmao XD

having kiba, akamaru, gaara, and shino in the swamp was really quite briliant...lol ^__^

i loved it...absolutely positively LOVED IT!!! XD

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meggo_and_vodka February 27 2010, 18:58:01 UTC
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it.

Sasuke was actually supposed to be a drunkard at first, but I discovered that this just fit him better.

And Ibiki, Tsunade, and even the three in the Fire Swamp just kinda fell into place.

Thank you again for commenting!

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sejitsu February 27 2010, 18:24:26 UTC
This was fabulous! XD I died laughing; it has to be the most entertaining KakaIru story I've read for a while~ Amazing job. I love it! *adds to memories* I really adore how you incorporated everyone into it, too!

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meggo_and_vodka February 27 2010, 18:59:24 UTC
That makes me happy...:D

And yeah, I went slightly off topic occasionally, but I'm also pretty happy I fit everybody in there.

Thanks!

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reeby10 February 27 2010, 22:13:43 UTC
You just totally made my day! That was hilarious XD The characters were perfect for their parts. And I loved Tsunade's line ^.^

Definitely adding this to memories :D

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meggo_and_vodka February 28 2010, 03:26:55 UTC
Yaay! Thank you! Just the words I needed after a long day at work.

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reeby10 February 28 2010, 22:27:02 UTC
Aww I'm glad ^.^

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ssecca01 October 11 2010, 23:16:14 UTC
Oh this story was hilarious. My favourite line came right at the start Konohamaru lowered his voice conspiratorially. "Is this a yaoi story?" I just couldn't stop laughing picturing Konohamaru saying that to the Sandaime.

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meggo_and_vodka October 11 2010, 23:56:40 UTC
XD Thanks! The Konohamaru parts were actually some of my favorites to write; he's pretty fun.

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