Let's Try Again - Fill In

May 04, 2005 22:12

Well, I guess to ask you to come up with a fill in the blank poem isn't quite easy or something... so I'll do my thing again. Why, you ask? Because I like reading your poems, and because, admit it, you like writing them. :) It's a bit shorter that the others, so I hope you all will participate ( Read more... )

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It's in Him anonymous May 5 2005, 03:25:20 UTC
Burning the dross away,
singing of Your mercies,
as the disappointment of my sin drifts,
You are my need.

As the anticipation grows,
as a reinforced inclination persists,
treading lightly,
You are my strong tower.

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ainfantino16 May 7 2005, 17:28:37 UTC
Running away,
singing of love.
As the seas drifts,
you are the one that draws me near.

And as the grass grows,
as a strong man of power,
shining lightly,
you are the one that draws me near.

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what's uncovered bobbyme56 May 7 2005, 22:57:55 UTC
Running away,
singing of jaded memories
as the dawn drifts,
you are ever in mind.

As the humility grows,
as a strong wind churns,
you whisper lightly;
you are my love.

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I Hate Physics dauber1football May 9 2005, 20:53:26 UTC
As I sent Physics away for the summer,
singing of no more 15 hour homework weeks,
as the detestation of exams drifts away,
you are lucky you didn't have to take Physics.

As the animosity towards Physics grows,
as a strong despise remains,
I am not taking my feelings lightly,
you are lucky you didn't have to take Physics.

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my turn megs2911 May 10 2005, 23:39:15 UTC
alrighty folks, I'll add my poem now - and if you haven't yet, please feel free to do so! :)

Awake, My Soul, and Sing!

Farthest galaxies and closest breaths away,
singing of salvation
as the fervency drifts,
You are singing my song.

As the urgency of melodic interchange grows,
as a strong desire to enter in persists,
bidding lightly,
You are my song.

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