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aubergineautumn August 9 2010, 08:22:52 UTC
Culture shock and loneliness and denial...your story made me cry.

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goldie3 August 9 2010, 09:52:30 UTC
Your writing is different, unique and in a good way. There is a strange charm to it. So, even though the fic was depressing and the setting melancholy, there's a lyrical quality in it.

The characters were flawed. But that's a pretty simple description, which your characters weren't by any means. All of them resided in the gray region, in fact they were tilted more towards the black side of things.

The ending was tragic and hopeless. But still it felt as if that was the only way it could end. So, definitely a fitting ending.

Honestly, words aren't enough to describe how this fic made me feel. This was one of the most evocative fics of this BB, that's for sure.

Thanks for sharing :)

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anifsemaj August 9 2010, 16:22:59 UTC
*grabs tissues*

I don't even have words...

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viciousbluesky August 9 2010, 17:41:58 UTC
The first fic to make me cry. Ever. You should feel very accomplished.

Crying aside, this was absolutely wonderful. I can't really formulate any other words right now...seriously, that was just. Ah. ♥

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adventuresofsam August 10 2010, 10:07:07 UTC
That was really beautiful. Thank you for writing and sharing

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