Eternal - Chapter 1

Nov 06, 2010 14:12


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mysticseas November 6 2010, 15:00:08 UTC
So heartbreaking yet beautiful. I'm looking forward to next update. :)

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meheartyunho November 7 2010, 11:21:10 UTC
Iiih thank youu <3 :D

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rainycakes November 6 2010, 15:21:13 UTC
Ah, I really like this~ :) Some of my fave stories are the ones where Yunho is with someone in Jae's family, but falls head over heels for Jae as soon as he meets him. :D

I'm excited for these updates! And p.s. I loved 1095 Days Later; I just didn't exactly have an lj yet when I first started reading it (in case you never saw a comment from me on it before). It was one of the first Yunjaes I read. XD

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meheartyunho November 7 2010, 17:13:27 UTC
Haha yes, for some reason it's very realistic too since they had an instant connection and chemistry irl ^_~

Hahah you're so cute XD Thank you so muchh I'm glad you liked it :DD Haha the first yunjae I read was m-preg, so now I loooove m-preg to bits haha XD

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yunho1205 November 6 2010, 19:05:04 UTC
YAY!!! An update!!! How are you hon??? Good, I hope!!

Gosh, I really love this story!! I feel so bad for Yunjae though! It makes me so sad every time Jae says that soon he'll have to fall out of love with Yunho. :( I wonder if Yunho is really gonna marry Jae's sister?? And, oh no! Why is the sister in love with Yunho too?? Now, SHE'S gonna get hurt also!! :(

Hahahahahaha!! Don't mind me dear!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! <333

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meheartyunho November 8 2010, 18:45:22 UTC
Weee ^^ Well, when you wrote this comment I was good, but now I'm sick T.T Headaches, dizzy, sore throat, fever. Blah. I'm trying to write a bit on the fic but things are moving slow >.<

:DD I'm so glad you like this one too! I know you liked my other fic so I'm happyyyy ^-^ Haha you have to be the only one that pities JJ's sister, most o my readers don't even pity YUNHO! XDD Kudos to you hun! I hope you're pitying Yunho too XD It seems like I haven't explained Yunho's point of view enough D:

Meheheh thank youz :DD <33

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yunho1205 November 8 2010, 19:32:39 UTC
Of course I like this one also!! It's sooooo good!! YOU'RE so good!! :)

You're sick? Oh no! Get plenty of rest and take some vitamin C!! :)

Well, yeah I do feel bad for Jae's sister. I mean, yes Yunho loves Jae, and Jae loves Yunho, but the sister loves Yunho too, and who loves her? :( No one. Don't get me wrong, I want Yunjae together, but I feel bad that the sister will get hit with a double whammy! BOOM-your fiance is in love with someone else! And BOOM-that someone else is YOUR BROTHER!! Hahahahahahaha!! Maybe Changmin can come in and sweep her off her feet!! Hee hee!!

Get better soon dear!! <333

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ouji November 6 2010, 19:51:04 UTC
OMO!~ it's so sad for yunjae TT^TT
and so past realistic about the robbery :D
It was very well- written ^^
I know it's just the first chappie but i can't wait for all those 9+ cahpters to come! xD
Also I can't wait to see when they get their vampire-thing ON! LOL!~
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Thanks for updating! :'D it was a good chappie!<3

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meheartyunho November 8 2010, 18:49:52 UTC
Isn't it? T.T Sort of like their current situation with all the drama and no contact etc etc D:
Ohh thank youu :DD I'm glad to hear that, cuz I struggle a lot to keep it in the past and give it a certain feel. So thank you! :)

Haha it will be a while until they become vampires but it'll get there ;D
Mihi, no problem hun! :D Thank you again <3

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ouji November 8 2010, 21:04:16 UTC
Omigawd you're right!! T.T
lol i really can't wait and you're very welcome! <3

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zoevo November 6 2010, 20:26:06 UTC
This is exactly the type of affair I love, intense and irresistible love affair with non -stop longing glances and sneaking around.
Plus you wrote it hot!
man, I'm getting more and more curious as to how their love started.
Counting down to next 2 weeks!

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meheartyunho November 10 2010, 18:54:01 UTC
Hehe thank you! :D That's how I love them too when I read yunjae fics (even though they often aren't like that T.T) so I decided to write it that way :DD
Ohoohhhh thank you! ^_~ some added smexiness is always welcomed, right? Haha two weeks will go by in a flash! Thank you again hun <33

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