The ANGST in the last three paragraphs KILLED ME DEAD. Now I don't know if I can wait for the next chapter because I'm so concerned about what happened and I'm kind of freaking out over here!!
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ARGH. I KNEW I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN THEM OUT. WHY DID I NOT? URGH. I suck. Fuck. Just remember! CHAPTER 11 IS THE BOT!SAM CHAPTER. And you also have to sit through BB angst. His PoV is next. But then chapter eleven, SAM COMES BACK. And then when he gets around Ratchet, it's explained why everyone thought he died. (Except nameless mechs that will remain nameless -- until I finish BB's fractured little psychotic break. Yaaaay. One of these days, I shall learn to write linearly.)
NO YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE TAKEN THEM OUT. If anything, it made it all the more interesting! Instead of it just being, "Aw, i need to hug all of them and give them candy," it became "HUGS AND CANDY AND OMGGGGGGGG NEEEEEEEED MORRRRRRRREEEEEE." So. GOOD THING!
I'm so excited to read all of the angst! Especially BB's my-mind-is-broken-cause-my-one-true-love-but-i-don't-realize-it-yet-is-dead!freak out! I was going to say I hope you never learn to write linearly, but I guess you kind of need that for, you know, life, so I shall instead say I hope you never write linearly for this fic. It adds so much to it!
Haha, well ... his mind is definitely jumbled up. Much like Sam, he just goes "HAHA, IT DOESN'T COUNT. LALALA, I can't hear you!". Although, we do get to learn some things about Bee, yay. I don't think I could write lineally if I TRIED. :\ As long as I've been writing, its been: "Twenty chapters from now, this scene will actually be put in!" And yes, this does make writing essays a real job.
Oh, honestly, Sam has it worse in the Decepticon!Sam fic. (Which, btw, I had no idea I was hiding, lolz. It's on FF.N if that helps, any) Besides, it's fascinating to see how they respond to such extreme stress (OH, WE'RE ALL TERRIBLE PEOPLE HERE! [/Cheshire cat])
And the Decepticon!Sam fic is of a very different flavor, since it was born from musing about this fanfic. Mostly, it's a side project, where as Conceptions is MAI BABAI.
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The ANGST in the last three paragraphs KILLED ME DEAD. Now I don't know if I can wait for the next chapter because I'm so concerned about what happened and I'm kind of freaking out over here!!
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ARGH. I KNEW I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN THEM OUT. WHY DID I NOT? URGH. I suck. Fuck. Just remember! CHAPTER 11 IS THE BOT!SAM CHAPTER. And you also have to sit through BB angst. His PoV is next. But then chapter eleven, SAM COMES BACK. And then when he gets around Ratchet, it's explained why everyone thought he died. (Except nameless mechs that will remain nameless -- until I finish BB's fractured little psychotic break. Yaaaay. One of these days, I shall learn to write linearly.)
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NO YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE TAKEN THEM OUT. If anything, it made it all the more interesting! Instead of it just being, "Aw, i need to hug all of them and give them candy," it became "HUGS AND CANDY AND OMGGGGGGGG NEEEEEEEED MORRRRRRRREEEEEE." So. GOOD THING!
I'm so excited to read all of the angst! Especially BB's my-mind-is-broken-cause-my-one-true-love-but-i-don't-realize-it-yet-is-dead!freak out! I was going to say I hope you never learn to write linearly, but I guess you kind of need that for, you know, life, so I shall instead say I hope you never write linearly for this fic. It adds so much to it!
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Haha, well ... his mind is definitely jumbled up. Much like Sam, he just goes "HAHA, IT DOESN'T COUNT. LALALA, I can't hear you!". Although, we do get to learn some things about Bee, yay.
I don't think I could write lineally if I TRIED. :\ As long as I've been writing, its been: "Twenty chapters from now, this scene will actually be put in!" And yes, this does make writing essays a real job.
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And the Decepticon!Sam fic is of a very different flavor, since it was born from musing about this fanfic. Mostly, it's a side project, where as Conceptions is MAI BABAI.
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