I finished pencilling all the pages for the comic I am going to submit to the Break anthology a little while ago. And today I cleaned them up a little bit and cropped them down for posting (after having a pretty good day at the beach). Here they are:
By the way, I think is the closest I have come to drawing an actual kiss so far, and my reactions was basically like this.
I changed some panels around to keep the camera from changing too much, but I'm wondering about flow of action and readability now, so let me know if you guys think anything isn't clear.