I honestly want to know what you all think about this one. Hit me with your critiques, guys! I WANT YOU TO HIT ME AS HARD AS YOU CAN.
Also posted to my DA account.
Don't let the sun come up
I don't want this night to end
When the mad scientist made the ringmaster
He wasn't aware of how beautiful a man he'd be
Charismatic, sophisticated and extraordinary
All the things the mad scientist wished he could be
The ringmaster could whip a crowd into a wild frenzy
Make them scream and cry for more
Keep them guessing, on the edge of their seats
For sure, the ringmaster would never bore
Don't let the sun come up
I don't want this night to end
The ringmaster is here
Our problems he will mend
But what the crowds never knew about him
The ringmaster was a normal man
Just like the mad scientist himself
Only able to do what any other can
He laughed and cried, he even loved another
The one they called the beast or bear
At night they danced until they slept
And in the morn they'd greet the fair
Don't let the sun come up
I don't want this night to end
The ringmaster is here
Our problems he will mend
Don't let the sun come up
The ringmaster comes alive in the shadows
I don't want this night to end
He'll take all our problems to the gallows