By Guile Eyes- Chapter One The Devil Himself.

[meiori]

AN: First of all I would like to say this my first truly worked on fanfic. Its rough, its a bit random, but I've worked hard on it and I am trying my hardest. Please give me reviews, help, encouragement if you feel I deserve it. Yes Harry is pissed off, he's hateful, even cruel at times. But I think I would be, honestly, so I just went with it

Comments

[hayotochi]

Gah! Is this another of your attempts to get me to read this?! Okay, -fine-.

Just, please...lj cut? It get's tiring to have to scroll over all that everytime I come to my friends page...

[hayotochi]

Kay, I feel the need to point out - this isn't your beta'd version. I know - because that thing about the quidditch games is wrong.

Now that I'm done being a general bitch (in which I apologise most profusedly [oh god, there I go again channelling Jake for Short]) I shall get on with it!

You're characterization of Harry and Snape is most wonderful. <3 And I find their snarky interaction makes me snicker like a little boy.

I also find it amusing, for some reason, that Snape owns a copy of a book written by Voltair. And the Friends for Friendless Fellows?

...SOAP MAN IS MY NEW SUPER HERO. Whee.

But, all in all, it's very well written and good story. Though, I can't say this makes me any fonder of the pairing.

[meiori]

What's wrong with the Quittich? O.o tell me! and how exactly do I do the shortening thing? I don't know. *da sad*

[hayotochi]

Your beta mentioned something about the games, remember?

Each house will only play three games. Therefore, technically, Gryffindor can't win three games and then lose one.

and as for the lj-cut thing

This goes before the story (minus the underscores, keep a space between cut and text)

[hayotochi]

...well, since I can't apparantly show you what the lj cut looks like, I'll have to show you on AIM. >