lullaby

[melanth0]

Title: lullaby
Length: 1474
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, kind of, and an unnamed third party.
Rating: pg-13?
Warnings: a small quantity of gore, a small quantity of incest.
Prompt: from lylithj2 over at spnpromptcake. Song lyric: Dream brother, my killer, my lover. ("Battle for the Sun” by Placebo) Object: Holy oil.
Beta by the excellent blubird_pie. <3

Comments

[abeautifullie3]

I've been trying to think of the right word, and I think I got it...haunting.
Painfully, frighteningly, not sure if you want to cry or scream, haunting.

[melanth0]

well, that's definitely what I was going for, so I'm glad it worked! thanks!
<3

[shyriann]

So I know I've said this to you before over in the DeanAlistair Com, but I feel it needs reitterating that HOLY GOD YOU ARE MADE OF AWESOME. Your style of prose is just so beautiful, simple, and full of a dark, hollow melancholy. I didn't read the summary first, so I got to the point of "Tell me where you are" and went "Oh, god, Sammy, it's Lucy, don't tell him, he's not Dean!" And then I went wait, when is this set, and checked... and then I went "Oh god, oh god, it's Michael, that's WORSE!" But, the feeling of lost hopeless need for Dean was so fluidly perfect that I found myself wanting him to come anyways, just like Sam. So, so good.

[melanth0]

THANK YOU SO MUCH. -hug- You just totally made my day. What an awesome comment.
<3<3<3

[tigriswolf]

This is so pretty and shuddery. *shivers*

[melanth0]

Thank you! <3

More awesome...far out!

[madmonkeyshow]

Just gets better and better here, doesn't it? More fine writing...cool! Nice to know I'm not the only one with a library card anymore! Nobody bothers to use proper spelling on the web...except me and two other people, one of whom must be you. Thanks for this.

Re: More awesome...far out!

[melanth0]

Thank you!

There is definitely an epidemic of awful grammar, but I've found that the Supernatural section of Livejournal is an oasis of excellent. Those of us who care about such things are far from alone!