Comments | melfinalupin: Team 8 SMUT ^

melfinalupin

Team 8 SMUT ^_^

Sep 18, 2006 23:34

Homecoming by Melfina Lupin

Pairings: Kiba/Hinata, Shino/Hinata, Shino/Kiba. All are around 19-20ish.

Warning: NC-17

Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto

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Comments 8

mija711 September 19 2006, 06:30:17 UTC

omg that was so freakin HOT, left me breathleass..I mean WOW that is the first threesome of them Ive ever read and it was totally Sexy as all get out, you wrote it well and had my intrest from the get go, I loved it, and Im usually not one for threesomes but that was very very hot, love the whole Idea, how much Kiba loves them both so much and how much the other two love thier team mates as well, it was very good, I thank you much for the awesome read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

melfinalupin October 5 2006, 16:53:59 UTC

Thank you very much for a such a nice review!! :D This was the first threesome that I ever wrote so I'm glad that people like it. Team 8 is love.

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melfinalupin October 5 2006, 16:55:02 UTC

Haha! ^___^ Thank you for reading and reviewing so nicely *hugs* I hope to write a sequel to this soon.

hashire September 19 2006, 19:08:35 UTC

Oh WOW. That was amazing. I can't think. Zomg.

Damn you for distracting me so wonderfully when I'm supposed to be studying for my first math exam. I don't know if I can focus now.

Not that I'm too upset about it. Not at all, in fact.

melfinalupin October 5 2006, 16:56:26 UTC

I have the same problem...only doing something else when I should be studying. But I'm happy you liked this story cuz this is the first time I wrote something like this :D Thanks for reviewing

bandit_wraith September 22 2006, 08:26:55 UTC

fdjakf;dasjkf;d omg that was die-of-blood-loss-from-nosebleed-hot! Team 8 is so much love! and all three of them! I love teamsomes!

This was awesome, your smut rocks!

melfinalupin October 5 2006, 16:58:22 UTC

Thankyouthankyouthankyou :D *feels loved* Teamsomes...zomg...i have a new word. It's so awesome ^__^

I hope to write a sequel to this soon but I'm so busy lately. Plus Team Sand has taken hold on my brain T_T

wraths_smile February 17 2007, 08:06:17 UTC

homghomghomg

I must say that this is the first team 8 threesome I've ever read (as well as the first fic even involving a girl in how many moths now?? XP), and I LOVE IT!! I love the way you portrayed Shino, that had to be my favorite part (but probably just 'cause Shino is my favorite charecter >_<), and I swear, the whole time I was waiting for Shino to miraculously show up, and when he did, I was all

o.0 homg

I swear, this fic makes me want to write veeery dirty things >_<

Thank you so much for sharing!

-Wrathy-chan