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Chapter Two: Love In The Rain

Mar 28, 2011 03:26

Yong reached Hongdae in no time since The Cafe is at the brink of Apujeong, not too far off from everything but yet not right in the middle of the hustle and bustle. He circled around the block near the club trying to look for a place to stop at least and since tonight is Club Day, the area is just jam packed. He took out his phone and dial her ( Read more... )

alternate universe, chaptered, bittersweet, romance

Comments 12

nhimnhimnhim March 28 2011, 11:08:08 UTC

The way you porttrait Yong and Hyun here is very interesting. She likes to take things for granted and he's like the 2nd character on the side way in drama who loves the girl in silent but never got her in the end. There must be something happened in the past that made her break up with him and he still totally devotes himself to his ex gf.
Actually, I'm not so fond of Han Geu Roo here. She's a daring lady but a Yongseo fan girl in me hating her for being so straight-forward. She would be a big obstacle for their watever kind relationship in future.
Love Minhyuk and Shinhye couple. At first, I thought why there were so many girls related to Yong but it turned out Shinhye fell for Minhyuk. Hoepfully, he will remember her the next time and they will have more chance to know each other.

Thank you so much for updating. Please keep up the good work ^^

melibu7 March 31 2011, 01:29:33 UTC

thanks for reading :) actually, i also don't like groo. that is why i put her in cos then it will be easier to dislike her LOL. i don't want to be putting girls that i like to dislike if you get what i mean.

rsmchirps March 28 2011, 12:58:16 UTC

Lol at shy Minhyukkie! That's an interesting pairing there, our own alternate Festival script - I like it A LOT! And I'm finding Hyun very interesting. A bratty Hyun is a nice contrast to her public image as we see it. Yong forever on the sidelines, andwae! Hopefully the Groo babe will shake things up a little for them. Looking forward to the next installment. Dare I say it, less tweeting...more updating!! Ha! Ha! I'm kidding... keep tweeting or I'll miss you :)

melibu7 March 31 2011, 01:29:51 UTC

unnie!!!!!!!!! hugs!!!!!!!!!!!!

oqyoiko March 28 2011, 13:57:48 UTC

hoho.. thx for updating sizt... honestly for me this story is little difficult. but it's mean u're such a good author for me. hyun's character is so diffrent in here, poor yong. i think he's still love hyun so much so it makes him okay even though he's realize that hyun just used him... no jinwoon part in here?. i wonder a relationship between yong, hyun & jinwoon. looking forward for ur next chp.. hahha shinhye & minhyuk? good pairing too ..:)

melibu7 March 31 2011, 01:31:35 UTC

thanks for reading :) not much jinwoon. he is not really that significant in this fic for now. don't know if i will add him into it.

lingzw87 March 28 2011, 14:26:33 UTC

hihi

interesting... Hyun is really different... she is like taking him
for granted... she thinks he will always be there... I wonder how she will react if he starts paying attention to Geu Roo. I like this!!

looking forward to the development of this

ling

melibu7 March 31 2011, 01:33:10 UTC

thanks for reading! i am looking forward to yours as well especially memory :)

faisazali March 28 2011, 15:12:07 UTC

i can sense a very interesting, emotion-twisting story later...
so, so, so, interesting~~

yong looks so pathetic here.. (sorry, i don't know what other words to put~~ )and what with hyun's been playing around with his feelings?? hmm...

i should not missed the next chapter!

shinhye-minhyuk looks so cute!!! ^^
suddenly i see them as very compatible..
coz usually i prefer minhyuk-yuri pair..
but it's ok sometimes for a new twist..

but absolutely not for yongseo!!
i can't seems to accept that woman..
what's her name again?
oh, han geu roo..
{whose her in reality anyway? sorry but never heard about her before~~)

will be waiting for the next update!!
thanks noona~~ ^^

melibu7 March 31 2011, 01:37:31 UTC

thanks chingu! yuppers, i just thought a fresh pairing would be good and i do like shin hye but if i put her in geu roo's position then ppl will dislike her.

as for geu roo, well... she is the girl in the hazzy cf with yong. i have nothing against her but she will be easier to dislike so to speak. i don't want to put someone i like and end up having everyone disliking her. anyway, dont worry she is kinda insignificant in some sense.