Lie

Apr 25, 2011 17:29


He is the popular guy in the university, a well-liked all rounder whereas she is the smart-nerdy girl with a good friend or two. Normally this is the part where the story would be about how much she hate his guts but then again love and hate is just a thin line. But no, this time around she is just like any of the girls in their university, except ( Read more... )

alternate universe, rated, one-shot, angst, romance

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curcol April 26 2011, 01:47:00 UTC
this is so heartbreaking...
pass me some tissues, please... T^T

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melibu7 April 26 2011, 02:26:07 UTC
errmmm here you go... *tissue* at least happy ending?

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curcol April 26 2011, 05:38:00 UTC
you're right, it ended happily...
but still...my weak heart... T^T
I wonder how could you have such dream?

aigooh... rereading it...(I'm such a masochist)

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pigmom April 26 2011, 07:57:31 UTC
i really love your writing
it just flows out so well ~ i finished reading b4 i knew it :D:D:D
but i think im missing sth...hmmmm i still dont get y shes mad O.o did he cheat?

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melibu7 April 26 2011, 09:24:13 UTC
thanks for reading :)

nope, you are not missing something. i just did not put it in writing. to be honest, i did not think of the reason per say. but i can give you one.

think of it this way - she made him promise not to cheat and lie rite? what she heard, she ended up being sad and confuse whereas what he heard made him scared. so it has to be something to do with his promiscuous ways. since the rumor is that, then he would lose her hence he is scared.

so let me make it up for you - yes he did in some ways, cheat i mean. what she heard was that he slept with one girl who became pregnant. but in reality, he did not because he was too drunk at that time and the girl actually slept with another guy, yong so happen to be in the room. when they woke up, it was only yong and the girl so naturally she would assume.

does it make sense? LOL

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ext_487567 April 27 2011, 07:30:48 UTC
I was re-reading this again for like the 3rd times oredii coz you know i'm weird that way... and i just about to ask you what was the "thing" that hyun heard...

ah soooo.... in all fairness...Yong here is a slut at first?? but turns out he is a slut with heart so at the end he's a slut no more?! rite? rite? i'm rite? rite??

LOL *trolling in your LJ* *runs off to hide*

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melibu7 April 27 2011, 07:50:23 UTC
yup yong is slut with a heart here! then again when is he not?? LMAO!

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ext_487567 April 27 2011, 08:00:41 UTC
well he is always a slut 24/7 ... i just don't know when he's a slut with heart.... LMAO!!!!
i WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB WUB this bery muchie.... sankyuuuu... *still trolling ur LJ* nyahahahahaha...

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rsmchirps April 27 2011, 19:25:19 UTC
Beautiful one shot Mel! Love the way they fall for one another. Love the way the story ends!

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melibu7 May 2 2011, 18:06:13 UTC
i guess forgiveness is the key ... though really, i dont know if i can be that forgiving.

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