Chapter Eight: Love In The Rain

May 09, 2011 14:15

The rain has finally stopped sometime in the early morning and now the sunshine is streaming through the window pane.

He open his eyes and caught sight of her, next to him still fast asleep. She looked like an angel, with her dark hair spilling on the bed and her long lashes sweeping her sun-kissed cheeks.

He’d toyed with a woman’s hair before, but ( Read more... )

alternate universe, rated, chaptered, bittersweet, romance

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omgirly May 9 2011, 08:21:55 UTC
aaarggh!!! a single misunderstood moment can unravel things in a matter of seconds. hope you update soon. i'm totally drawn in.

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:38:42 UTC
heys!!! thanks for reading :) it's really an honor to me that you like and follow the story :) i will try to update soonest. maybe i will give you a surprise.

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rsmchirps May 9 2011, 08:58:48 UTC
Aah! Wae are men such jerks, or is it just that he's so used to being jerked around by her, he assumes that's what's happening here too? Will it kill him to hear her out? Oh well, will wait (impatiently) for the next update.
And oh yes, that waking up together scene was just perfect. Absolutely, beautifully written....

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:39:26 UTC
unnie!!! well he is just an airhead. you know how guys are sometimes.

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:39:50 UTC
plus he is emotionally drained with what is happening to his brother.

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lingzw87 May 9 2011, 09:02:52 UTC
ahhhhh!!!!!!

cliffy!!! I hate this!! oh why can't yong hear properly what she has to say...
I am exasperated that I want to cry...
argh... it is so frustrating...
in a way Hyun's style is rather fleeting n I guess he got tired... I understand but dun agree...
why can't people just listen to everything before jumping to conclusions

hope it guess resolved soon... do we need them to be 5 years apart for yong to understand her? n trust her?

please dun let me wait long...

Argh!!

ling

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:42:42 UTC
LING!!!! i love the 2nd chapter of love story :) inspired by definitely, maybe rite?

yup, it's frustrating rite? well, it's waiting to happen. yong has kept it in him for a while. with their kiss and her nonchalant attitude abt it (although in reality we know she is nervous so she try to flick it off), plus him being emotionally drained from what is happening, it's bound to go this way.

thanks for reading!

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camoteq May 9 2011, 09:11:50 UTC
I hate it when people assume and jump into conclusions. Ughhh. LOL. Anyway, thank you for the update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:43:27 UTC
yup! cos when they do, normally they make an ass out of u and me LOL. thanks for reading and following the story :)

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zealous2002 May 9 2011, 09:16:26 UTC
I'm so frustrated with what happen..
Sometime I wanna do a smackdown on Yonghwa..
Why don't he just ask her??
Goshh....
He just saying something that he can't take it back.
If I'm at Hyun side, I just go...

Since you really can make me feel like this... congrats for this new chap. ;)
Hope to read more on your next update...
U choose a very good music...
Love it...

zealous

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melibu7 May 10 2011, 00:46:37 UTC
wow! thanks for reading and since you feel that way good, cos it's meant to be that way. this emotional meltdown is inevitable with recent events.

oh yes, i love this song too! kinda stuck in my head at the moment and surprisingly kinda suit the chapter too.

btw, THANK YOU so much for all the nice goodies at soompi :)

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