Final Chapter: Love In The Rain

May 10, 2011 23:05

“So you got everything ready for tomorrow’s flight?”

“Yup.”

“Are you sure you have got to go so soon?”

Hyun look at her sister and lay her head down on Jessica’s belly, finding comfort in listening to the steady rhythm of her niece/nephew.

“Don’t you want to wait until Junior is born?”

“Unless Junior decides to pop out now, then I guess not. I have been ( Read more... )

alternate universe, rated, chaptered, bittersweet, romance

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omgirly May 10 2011, 15:32:48 UTC
oh yay!!! i love how you tied up the ending of this fic. i'm a sucker for happy endings (as you can probably tell) and seeing how the timing was finally right for both of them was nice to read. the confession that it's always been him was also heartwarming. i'll miss this fic, but will look forward to your new creations. :)

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melibu7 May 11 2011, 02:27:29 UTC
happy endings? me too me too! that's why i love your fics. will hopefully come out with a new one. got something in mind but will see how.

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faisazali May 10 2011, 16:42:54 UTC
This is just beautiful~~

Love how you let everything settle down earlier in the chapter..and later the chapter is just filled with them discovering affections within each other..

Love the last scene the most!!
Despite the rain, imagine them sitting together, wrapped in the blanket, with sweet little talks, and brings such a warm feeling...
Is it weird if i say, I’d imagine myself like that in the future..kekeke

The fact that they've been waiting for each other for a long time...
Make the ending more meaningful and more beautiful...
For sure, I’ll missed this story..
Hope you'll comeback with another story in mind...^^
Thanks so much for the whole story, chinggu~~

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melibu7 May 11 2011, 02:29:22 UTC
thanks for reading :) and following the story.

nope, i don't think it's weird. i think wrapping your love one and yourself in a blanket and sitting at the balcony while watching the pitter patter of the rain, that's something simple yet a joy to do.

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constantia11 May 10 2011, 16:50:33 UTC
yay! a happy ending, and I am a happy goguma once again.
thank u for writing a beautiful story.
his patience pays off. I'm a strong believer that something good is bound to happen to those who wait patiently. LOL
you will still be writing more stories, right Mel?
Looking forward to your next pieces.

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melibu7 May 11 2011, 02:30:28 UTC
yay! happy ending indeed. it was meant to be a happy ending from the start, just how is the happy ending going to be like.

i do believe that good things come to those who wait for sure.

thanks for reading and following the story :)

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lingzw87 May 10 2011, 17:01:04 UTC
Mel Unnie!!

thank you so much for this... I love they way u tie it all together...
yippee no need to wait 5 years for them to kiss n make up...
the last scene was just lovely... it made me want to cry..,
I love the heart to heart talk... finally understanding the other person's heart...
thanks for the happy ending...

ling

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melibu7 May 11 2011, 02:32:38 UTC
Ling! you are welcome and thanks for reading and following :) yuppers, waiting for another 5 years Yong will be an ahjussi but still a hot one nonetheless. yup sometimes, i feel that your heart knows what it wants or need to do but it takes someone to give you the much needed push to see the light.

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baby_erica May 10 2011, 17:43:19 UTC
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah end?? aigoo!

i did not expect that..
it was a good fic to read.
nice story :)
good job melibu! :D

can't wait for the new one kekekke

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melibu7 May 11 2011, 02:33:33 UTC
LOL you did not expect the ending to come this fast? i don't want to drag them for another 5 years. the story will get stale i think.

nonetheless, thanks for reading and following the story :)

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