Seven Deadly Sins: Envy

[melibu7]

ENVY - This sin is that of jealousy or perverted love because it is the love and desire to own what belongs to someone else.

Sometimes being overly confident does not get you anywhere as Jung Yong Hwa discover when it comes to Seo Joo Hyun. The girl is sure a teaser, one minute hot, the next minute cold. They have managed to maintain a certain

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[ext_438763]

wow, one step closer. today is really a fanfic day for me. being sick and laying in bed. luckily tons of fanfic coming:-)

i really like this, hot issue of these lovely couple. seohyun here is different with seohyun in real life when she let a guy put his hand on her thigh:-). but i like it, different seohyun. cant wait for the next step of these two

[melibu7]

thanks for reading :) glad you like this chapter as well.

i like this hyun too. carefree and easygoing yet she knows what she wants and her principals (although she flirts around but she doesn't sleep around) still stand.

hopefully i won't let you down the next chapter.

[faisazali]

seriously..
another superb chapter!!
gosh, you are awesome..
you manage to make out a story with several chapters and each chapter got it's own main theme..themes in a theme..
superb! unique!!
jealous yong and hyun..
jealousy is one of the things that i really like about them..
please, i want more from yours.. ^^
thanks a lot..

p/s: can i blame that car door slamming sound?? it just distract the whole situation.things just got interesting.. -.-

[melibu7]

LOL yes do blame the person who slam the car door LOL
thanks for reading!

[erikaoi]

Uh.they are so oblivious.update soon.

[melibu7]

thanks for reading!

[rsmchirps]

I love it! I'm loving where this series is going. I like the tension between them.
And the fact that they both know what the other is feeling, just that they're not sure where it takes them next.
Love love love your word choices and language in the story. My favorite line....
"Bewilderment sliced through the heavy beat of desire."
That line sliced right through me.
Can't wait to see how you'll handle the remaining deadly sins.....
Hugs!

[melibu7]

UNNIE!!! thanks for reading... sins are fun LOL

[lady_lia257]

Hahaha. I love jealous people and their sufferings! It's good to read. I don't know the rest of the sins, since I'm a Moslem and I think the concept is Christian.

I'll be waiting for your next!

[melibu7]

LOL no worries you will find out soon about the other sins. hopefully i will be able to convey it well enough. thanks for reading!