When I See You Smile

[melibu7]

Note: This is another prompt with some of the writers of Gogumafics and this time around, the prompt are no1 billboard hit songs from year 1989 or 1991 which we all gave it a YS version, enjoy! Coincidentally, this song is also an all-time fave song of mine. the band does have perpetual bad hair day (that's the 80's for you) but do take time to

Comments

[gogumavillage]

hm, yeah, hyun really owns the smile:-) why i want every sunday is like this. full of fanfics:-)

it is so nice and the song just fits so good:-)another destiny and fate

[melibu7]

yah hyun have a great smile rite? i love yong's smile too. he should never ever fix his tooth.

the song is great. thanks for reading :)

[danmonique]

this is destiny coming into play...
i like this very much ! it makes one
believe that love made-in-heaven surely
still exists.

simply amazing story which made me feel
good... thanks a lot ! more stories, pls.

[melibu7]

i like to believe that. sigh doesn't everyone wish for a great love story for themselves? keeping fingers cross :) yup i am wishful that way.

thanks for reading.

[omgirly]

using photography to develop the plot and "when i see you smile" as the underlying theme was genius. writing "stalker hyun" added a nice twist to the story. it was nice seeing her portrayed differently. her character in your fic wasn't too over-the-top different, but definitely a welcome change.

[melibu7]

LOL hyun is funny eh? being a stalker and all LOL. it was either this or some angsty one LOL.

well, looking forward to yours when you post it :)

hi..

[msbarbietch]

i heart it.. it makes me crave for yongseo more and more..
i became your loyal fan fics since "the seven sins" series.. hehehe..

i love it when you turn the song into a beautiful Yongseo story.. good job!

Re: hi..

[melibu7]

as always thanks for reading and for the support :) i am glad you like it.

[faisazali]

hi noona!
this is so sweetly beautiful.. ^^
oh, i just love the title of this story..
and the plot is awesome!!

Hyun's obsession towards Yong is one of a kind!
and how she acted dumb because of the pic that she doubt so much..
and this is super cute!!! -->
[He reluctantly he broke the kiss, "Next time, ask."
She pouts and he moved to kiss her again,]

alternate universe is a really interesting genre..
and i've noticed you really are good at it, noona.. >_<
the way they become each others source of energy and courage despite knowing each other is just beautiful..
and the fateful events and meetings after flows naturally are splendid..
this kind of story, that ends with a perfect and sweet wrapped up, always made me feel touched..
how destiny works is not in the hand of man to understand but it definitely bring out something sweet if we know how to keep the faith and believe..

TQ so much noona!! ^^

[melibu7]

as always dongsaeng, thanks for reading and the support :)

i love alternate universe. it gives me the hope and the higher possibility of them being able to be together.

when ppl are in love, they are normally each other's strength and encouragement rite? :)