New Chapter

[melisandre013]

So, after much wait, for which I am apologizing, here's the new chapter of To Control. I hope you like it. It's shorter than I would like, but this is what you get. So enjoy it immensely. Beta'd by the wonderful, the magnificent, the miraculous ends_of_time . And for your viewing pleasure, I have a piece of artwork, drawn by nonoji awhile ago, that I am just now

Comments

[yume76]

kyaa~~! finally. i've been waiting for the chapter eagerly. i've been following this story in ff.net. and i think it is amazing. the setting of the story is awesome. i loved the way you created the characters. please keep posting more. *wiggles*

[melisandre013]

I'm glad you like it. My life is incredibly busy, so a moment to write is rare. I'll keep posting, it just might be slow.

[ilostmynuts]

Ah, I want more! How cruel! If you don't write more this instance, madame, I shall whither away and die!

[sventastic]

Oh... my... goodness.

I am completely in love with this fic and I have no idea what else to say *O*

OH SHOOT DENTIST APPOINTMENT.

Sorry I'll comment properly when I come back :'D

A proper review

[sventastic]

I am completely hooked onto this fic. I'm not even a big fan of Zo/San, but I can't wait for the next part!

The setting is wonderfully believable because of your lovely, lovely descriptions. I'm a bit of an AU-addict, but this fic is absolutely amazing. I love it when an author can seamlessly stick characters into an alternate setting and still write an awesome story and keep the characters the way they are.

I'm sorry I haven't commented on the other parts of this fantastic story, but, um, I just couldn't stop reading :'D -did not want to comment because it would've slowed me down- However, I think you beautifully wrote every single part of this story so far! Just wanted you to know.

I'm going to stalk you now. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Because I'm freaking out about Sanji. His poor hands ;_;

Re: A proper review

[melisandre013]

I have the next part written, actually. But it won´t be up for 7 weeks since I´m in Peru.

Sorry. But thank you for the comment. I´m glad you enjoy it.

Re: A proper review

[sventastic]

That's alright! I'll just wait until you come back.

You're welcome. :D

[withsweet_words]

Two more doors for Zoro could mean like two miles. Good chappie!