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Mar 13, 2009 22:25

So, hey. Do you guys remember that Epilogue to Blood and Smokes I promised back in July or whenever? Yeah, well I do. Well, I fail and just now finished it. It's not really that big of a deal, but I figured I'd post it. I'm sorry it's so late.

So here we go. It's unbeta'd, so excuse any awkward moments or whatever. And it's been awhile since I wrote ( Read more... )

one piece, zoro/sanji, blood and smokes

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popkin16 March 14 2009, 08:39:56 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

A wonderful end to a wonderful series :) I'm sooo happy they got their happy ending XD And you haven't been around lately -- is everything alright?

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melisandre013 March 14 2009, 15:55:42 UTC
Uh, I'm exhausted. I'm on Spring Break for another two days but then it's back to school.

I'll be fine. Thanks for asking.

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popkin16 March 15 2009, 08:35:46 UTC
Everyone seems to be busy this semester!

You're welcome! *glomp*

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melisandre013 March 15 2009, 15:58:17 UTC
*glomps back*

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ohsnap9292 March 14 2009, 15:10:22 UTC
Yes! More smoking Zoro! I love when he smokes Sanji's cigarettes, it's way hot. Next he needs to put one out on his forearm and his 'Fuck yeah.' under his breath. Or not.

What would happen next? Hopefully it would be that Zoro might gain some style. A suit, maybe. Zoro + Suit = Win. Keep dreaming Sanji.

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melisandre013 March 14 2009, 15:57:50 UTC
Zoro looks wonderfully snazzy in a suit. He should wear them more often. Or ever.

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ohsnap9292 March 14 2009, 16:35:12 UTC
And he'd have to wear those sweet hats too (are they called fedora hats? I don't really know...) and then Sanji would get pissed because Zoro would definitely pull off the suit look better than him.

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melisandre013 March 14 2009, 17:22:13 UTC
Haha. I think the idea of Zoro in a suit and fedora was the whole inspiration for To Control.

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theotherdenise March 14 2009, 17:02:36 UTC
I don't believe I've ever commented here before *embarrassed* so first I will say hello and that I enjoyed reading this story a lot.

I didn't notice any awkward moments and it didn't seem weird at all! It was a really good way to close the series, a very sexy happy ending. Really though, Sanji should just accept that Zoro rocks the casual look XD

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melisandre013 March 14 2009, 17:23:14 UTC
Well hello back.

I'm glad you liked it and that it wasn't ridiculously awkward or anything. Thanks for reading.

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shaolinqueen March 15 2009, 20:25:42 UTC
Here I am.
I love the evolution of the story and I'm so glad you wrote this Epilogue because, the story deserved one.
And what an epilogue!

So smooth, neat and natural and HOT, of course.
"Let's fuck" was awesome and bloody orgasms are the best.
Great, great work.

Smoking!Zoro should be illegal and you know I think that he wanted to be bad-influenced. A LOT!

Much, much love for your story! ♥

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melisandre013 March 15 2009, 21:49:11 UTC
Thank you dear. You are too kind. Much love for you. :D

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