Awesome new chapter

[melisandre013]

Smoker watched as Ace turned back into the darkness of the alleyway. The sun had since risen, but there was still enough shadow for Ace to disappear into the surrounding area, leaving the other men in the area unaware of that he had ever been present. Smoker turned around and headed back slowly. He saw Tashigi listening to a report from a soldier,

Comments

[cirrus74]

Ah, a sudden shift of scenes and characters. Will Ace and Smoker eventually get together? I hate how... resigned they both seemed to be.

And no, I still haven't gotten over Gin dying. I felt so sorry for him, I really loved the last paragraph of the last chapter. It was poetic.

[withsweet_words]

I'd put in ZoroxSanji in google, since there's few of it over in fanfiction, and a lj community popped up. Your story was the most recent, and I have had an extremely enjoyable time reading this!

Hopefully there is more stuff of this nature, meaning well written and not complete fluff, in the universe. Havent come across much as of it.

This story has a great plot and wonderful characterization. Its like watching an old 1920's crime movie and I'm loving every minute of it. You dont seem to be the fastest updated and no doubt, every time you update I'll have to re-read the story. Ahaha, but thats half the fun. I'll be watching your writings and I look forward to more on this specific story!

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