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melissa_42

An infinite capacity for self-deception 1/?

Sep 14, 2011 14:33

Title: An infinite capacity for self-deception (1/?)
Fandom: Latin Hetalia
Characters: Martina (fem!Argentina), Luciana (fem!Brazil), The Green Eyed Monster, Sebastián (Uruguay), Daniel (Paraguay), Manuela (fem!Chile), and possibly more. Not everyone is in every chapter, but they'll all be in the story eventually.
Pairings: mainly Martina/Luciana ( Read more... )

an infinite capacity for self-deception, f: latin hetalia, fanfic, c: uruguay, c: argentina, c: brazil, p: brarg

Comments 6

ilye_aru September 15 2011, 02:51:04 UTC

OH MY GOD GENDERBENT BR/ARG I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS. And I totally need to know how it goes, CONTINUEEEE IT /looks like a n00b.

melissa_42 September 15 2011, 03:14:40 UTC

I'M GLAD THIS PLEASES YOU. ♥

Haha, don't worry, I already have a few more chapters written up. So yes, MORE WILL COME.

berseker September 15 2011, 12:39:49 UTC

OK SO

THIS FIC WAS DELIGHTFUL. Like, with caps of delight. Everyone is so in character, with all the little differences that makes them girl and not boys, you know, and this is one of my favorite things about genderbend - how they keep the same personality but... different. It's hard to explain, but you know what I'm talking about, because you did it.

Martina is so impulsive and complicated and high maintenance and charming, and Luci is her... weirdly sometimes passive sometimes agressive self, and you handled it so well. And I loved the way you handled Martina's bitchiness and Luci talking about men all the time. This could have been a disaster, if someone less competent had tried, but, well. You're good. And they're fascinating. Martina's denial is so... touching, I don't even know. The last part was beautiful.

I'm really happy this is multichaptered, because reading it was so much fun. I can't wait for the next part.

(also, Sebby was awesome. He's so sane. And I'm amused at the fact that he's stuck with the chores. That's ( ... )

melissa_42 September 16 2011, 16:58:43 UTC

So.

Thank you so much for talking about the characterization. That's one of the my main problems, since I'm still trying to get a hold on the characters. Especially Luci - we don't get to see her thoughts here, and she is soooo confusing. She never does what I want her to. D: And yeah, I know exactly what you mean with the gender differences. If they had been boys, they would have probably just punched each other on the playground rather than sneak around and be catty.

Ah, Sebby - the only sane one in the bunch. He is so much fun to write. Haha, he doesn't mind the chores. If he wants his house tidy, he knows better than to let his cousins take care of things. XD

♥

aluha September 20 2011, 01:04:34 UTC

Aww this is so sweet! And I'm so angry with my stupid netbook, cuz it enlarge the letters properly, so I had to copy everything and paste at Word and it took a very long time and I WANTED TO READ

Anyway, since I'm smarter than this silly computer, I succeed in reading your fic and it's just lovely sob sob sob Sometimes Martina's just so MEAN! (but I know she doesn't do this on purpose, she's just being objective, I understand)

And I loved how all of them cousins are living together <33 Can't wait to read more <333

melissa_42 September 22 2011, 03:28:50 UTC

Wow, you're persistent! :D I'm so glad you liked it, the characters are so precious and I don't want to ruin them with my writing. ;__; Yes, Martina is kind of a bitch, but she's just really bad at thinking about the consequences before she speaks. /flicks nose

Originally I just wanted to write about Tina and Luci, but then the cousins decided they wanted in on the fun, too. xD I should have more posted soon! ^^ Thank you for commenting!