[fic] An infinite capacity for self-deception (2/?)

[melissa_42]

Title: An infinite capacity for self-deception (2/?)
Fandom: Latin Hetalia
Characters: Martina/Luciana (fem!Argentina)/(fem!Brazil)
Rating: PG-ish
Warnings: Human AU and some swearing.

Summary: In which Martina and Luciana try to spend time together like normal friends.

1|2|3| 4|5

Comments

[berseker]

I love everything about this. Even the song you were listening to when you posted it (I like that song, and somehow it WORKS, I don't even know).

And I love the tension here, and how they manage to work around it - or not - and how sometimes it feels like they're about to fight but they don't, and then someone says something when you don't expect it and they don't know what to do with it. And Luciana's issues. And Martina being Martina.

And the weird metaphorical spoons, I loved that, and I love the weird moment they have about Luci not getting it (that was low, no one gets French movies. You're not supposed to get it).

And then Luci being SEXY and licking her fingers. Poor Martina. I loved that part too.

So, basically, I'm deeply in love with everything.

[melissa_42]

That song. xD I was listening to it while posting and realized that it is basically the theme song of this fic. It's like my music knows me better than I do.

The tension and almost-fights....sometimes they wanted to go on and on, and I was like, Guys, you're being silly. We need to get on with the story. >:[

Hey, Martina probably read up on that French movie beforehand so she could look cool and knowledgeable about European cinema. Luci was not impressed. xD

The finger licking was actually an afterthought, but now I'm glad I added it.

Blah blah blah, SO. I'm really glad you like it so far! Your comments give me more confidence. <3

And I'm sorry if you had any trouble understanding some parts because I found a few sections while rereading it that were not English. orz

[berseker]

I'm listening to it now, and it's really perfect. The universe is shipping it too.

And... they get silly a lot. All I know is that the story feels so alive. And Martina so totally did. She's full of it.

And I'm really loving it. I can't wait for the next chapter <33

(lololol, no, I didn't have any trouble, I think. The only part that made me pause was the Is something the matter, because I think you mentioned it on tumblr, so I recognized it. )

[aluha]

This is just so cool and cute and sweet!

I was relieved to see that Luci came back to Martina's house ^___^ I mean, after that fight they had, I thought Tina would end up seeing the movie all alone, and, man, that's sad!

I should know Luci is THE BEST FRIEND OF ALL TIMES cuz, geez, french movies x___x how come Tinita doesn't see she's like totally loved back?

And now I can't wait to see their first kiss <33

[melissa_42]

Thank you! Martina's a bit...blind when it comes to her friends. They have some issues to deal with before they can kiss. ^^ I hope you stick with it!

[aluha]

Sure! I'll buy a ton of popcorn and watch it till the end :D