[fic] An infinite capacity for self-deception (5/?)

[melissa_42]

Title: An infinite capacity for self-deception (5/?)
Fandom: Latin Hetalia
Characters: Martina (fem!Argentina), Luciana (fem!Brazil), The Green Eyed Monster, Sebastián (Uruguay), Daniel (Paraguay), Manuela (fem!Chile), Miguel (Peru). Not everyone is in every chapter, but they'll all be in the story eventually.
Pairings: Martina/Luciana, side Miguel/

Comments

[berseker]

OH MARTINA. I can't decide if I want to hug her or if I want to facepalm or- I think I'll go with hug her, she's too adorable. How could anyone not fall in love with her?

Oh, and the dream was MEAN. I really didn't see it coming. Eeeeevil. And it was so cute and hot. Sigh. And then her thinking process, and the flailing about sexuality, and Miguel uuuugh poor Tina. I laughed at her pain. At least Manu is wise. And I love all the little details you add, like Tina's complicated sex life, and Manu's loneliness and all, it was subtle and interesting and really well done. This chapter was awesome.

So now I'll just FRET over Saturday. Martina is so optimistic, I hope everything will be perfect and full of rainbows and sunshine and Disney's singing birds flying around them orz.

[melissa_42]

Yeah, she needs a hug. The poor baby's confused. <3

Ah, I was hoping it wouldn't be too obvious that it was a dream at first. :3 I'm glad you liked how this chapter turned out because it was giving me a lot of trouble (ugh, that phone conversation, I hate phone conversations)

Just keep your fingers crossed! :D

[cremebrulee1]

I love it <3

[melissa_42]

I'm glad! Thanks for commenting!