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dylantoms September 29 2012, 15:44:52 UTC
Excellent, I really enjoyed this. Would love to see more :)

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meloenijs September 29 2012, 20:10:55 UTC
Thank you! I plan on writing the sequel if there's another round of reel_torchwood.

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fide_et_spe October 2 2012, 21:45:07 UTC
I really liked what you did with this. Although Jack was getting really too thin by the end!

I liked how even though it felt very Bridget Jones, the Jane Austen vibe was still there.

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meloenijs October 3 2012, 14:36:29 UTC
Thank you! I tried to let Jack steadily lose weight to show how much he was affected negatively by John.

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lilferret October 13 2012, 07:58:05 UTC
This was awesome. XD

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meloenijs October 14 2012, 09:53:30 UTC
Thank you :)

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great story! anonymous May 26 2013, 18:18:41 UTC
love it!!

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