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melonpaan

20 Sentences: Athena

Apr 30, 2013 14:48

20 Sentences: Athena

For tinyangl ♥

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takeuchi yuko, ishihara satomi, nagasawa masami, ninomiya kazunari, narimiya hiroki, matsuda shota, aiba masaki, horikita maki, *team arashi/sweet power forever, oguri shun, sakurai sho, yamashita tomohisa, yamada yu, yoshitaka yuriko, news, kimura takuya, arashi, **greek myth au, becky, kanjiya shihori, sweet power, ohno satoshi, matsumoto jun, kiritani mirei, kuroki meisa

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tinyangl April 30 2013, 18:59:29 UTC

I LOVE YOU. OH MY GOD THESE ARE AMAZING. I absolutely lovelovelove how you encompass Maki's relationships with each of the Gods in the whole of one sentence. EXCEPT NINO. HIS COULD'VE GONE ON FOREVER AND MAKI COULD STILL NOT FIGURE OUT FULLY WHAT HE IS TO HER. MY HEART. a;sdlkfjasldkfjalsdfjklaksdfj

I almost want to go through EACH ONE and tell you what I like about each, but that would be obnoxious. XD Instead, just know that omg, these are all so fucking amazing. (I ESPECIALLY LOVE ATHENA'S SENTENCE. (In every simulation Maki wins, she will always win.). FREAKING MAKI. ♥)

ALL MY HEARTS TO YOU. (I swear this would've been more coherent, but I'm spazzing, so let's go with that.)

melonpaan April 30 2013, 19:06:18 UTC

AHHH I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT. i was afraid you'd be put off cause one sentence isn't enough but aklddhah yes nino's sentence could go on forever and ever and it still wouldn't be enough for maki (or me :X).

you could go through each one who would mind but i'm so relieved even the random people with whom maki/athena doesn't have any real connections still read okay. and YES. i may have channeled batman into athena there, but if anyone among this group would do that, it would be her. and she WOULD win.

I LOVE YOU. ♥♥♥

tinyangl April 30 2013, 19:45:15 UTC

Dear, how could I ever get put off by your writing. ♥♥ Quality not quantity! :D (mostly for you.)

lolol YES. They still worked! I liked the insight into Yu's character for example, since I know nothing about her. lol ♥ (omg, I really like the sentence about aphrodite a lot. I have reread this btw. and will probably have new favorites EVERY TIME. XD)

I LOVE YOU LOADS! FEEL FREE TO PROMPT ME. it gives me things to think about on the way home and whatnot.

melonpaan April 30 2013, 21:03:09 UTC

♥♥♥

i had to rewatch yu's vip room appearance for that and when she started cooking vegetable dishes i was like MAKI LIKES VEGETABLES I CAN WORK WITH THIS. XD

ASK AND YOU SHALL RECEIVE. ;)

frostbittenlove May 1 2013, 02:21:08 UTC

So I may or may not be lurking in the shadows trying to see when you would update something related to J-EntxGreek Mythology crossovers, and BAM, this happens :DDD

Every reference to Athena!Maki's relationships to the other gods/goddesses is simply breathtaking, and I shall not risk saying anything else else I want to make a fool out of myself HAHA :D

(And randomly, because I've been pretty much of a GreekMyth geeko -- Hephaestus actually attempted to rape Athena LOL but he failed -- and I always think of some stunted Ohno/Maki due to this ahahaha /diesss but I am sure you are twisting the verse into something less scandalous and immoral LOL so I shall just await all your works in this verse. Yes. ♥)

Seriously though, I envy the likes of you -- writing seems to come so easily! I wish I had the same talent. :D

(Yes this is me ninja at work, since net at home pretty much sucks :x)

melonpaan May 1 2013, 02:43:22 UTC

Oh bb, you can lurk in the sunlight yanno. ;) (Also!! The intro post is being updated with Kami's writings in this AU as well. They are must reads. ♥)

And thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed each exploration! ♥

(LOL I did actually know this yes. I've been flitting around the greek gods wiki pages especially frequently to write this piece in particular, but we're quite into Disney-fying this AU. |D But I'm definitely sure that reference with regard to Ohno/Maki will show up in some form in this AU, Maki-bias after all.)

I think writing is really the more you do it, the easier it becomes, to be honest! I hadn't written any fiction, fan or otherwise, for a long time prior to, actually, getting inspired for your whiteday piece. Writing before that (and during) was really difficult and took me ages because everything felt wrong--but lately words flow quite easily, I think, just because I've been doing it on a more regular basis. And, well, not caring too much about typos/editing/making sure everything sounds perfect helps the ( ... )

frostbittenlove May 1 2013, 03:41:59 UTC

Then technically it won't be lurking anymore if I did it in the sunlight :P /shot plus I may or may not have been advised by my doctors to stay away from sunlight LOL YES I AM TAKING IT LITERALLY /runssss (Oh you two! You guys just had to explore and play in this verse that Reen enabled, I cannot possibly even. ♥♥)

I did! I am tempted to write something (with my obvious biases /coughsShoMakiandOhnoMakicoughs) BUT I shall just abstain lest I want to stain your perfect verse of my fail, and that would be so wrong, so yup, I'll pass, heehee. :P

(DISNEY-FYING. Oh yes. Except I am quite torn with the OhSatoJun because it is just wrong, and I have personal issues with philandering so it gets difficult to take in at times, but guh, why so beautiful that it's so sad?@?@ Though admittedly I ship Satomi and Jun more than Satomi and Ohno together. I honestly don't know what brought people to ship Satomi and Ohno LOL that VIP limo segment is cute and all, but--but that's all there is to it? /diesssss then again who am I to question people's ( ... )

melonpaan May 1 2013, 04:28:50 UTC

Then shall I just lurk in the shadows with you? I am quite pasty-skinned from preferring the inside with internet-access > sunlight. :D (It was really all Kami--she is the master enabler who wanted picspams. I am just the unfortunate bystander swept into her madness ( ... )

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