20 Sentences: Persephone

May 01, 2013 01:56

20 Sentences: Persephone

For tinyangl, obviously ♥


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tinyangl May 1 2013, 06:05:04 UTC
ahahaha!!! I see why you apologized for cheating, BUT I ADORE IT. I like the lit tle quirk of a phrase or a word or a small descriptor as being Yuriko's connection to a certain being. EROS MADE ME LAUGH A LOT. oh god. (psst, did you miss something in the Jun sentence? just making sure.)

lovelovelove the sentence for hera and how the marriage ceremony ended up being like; what they were wearing (how backwards!) and hera's wish to her.
oh hey is she wearing the shoes stolen from nino as she tumbles into shota's chest? how awesome. :D
oh the sentence for becky and the last half where she compares herself. T.T
I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU GOT IN THE JIN/MEISA BACKSTORY WE HAD PLANNED. DYING A LITTLE.
(also i like how you got in the parts i had in my drabble too! like the shoes and the books and ofc the bow and arrow which genius.)
ohno being a good pet. snerk.
i love the image of satomi with her head on yuriko's lap just relaxing in the quiet of someone who will not judge. T.T
wow. the image of mirei for yuriko was DARK. bad blood between hestia ( ... )

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melonpaan May 1 2013, 15:11:48 UTC
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jun is fixed now sorry. I should not be writing so late at night.

Yes she is wearing the shoes and yes, I think Yuriko loves Becky so much, but she's never gotten over feeling like she doesn't quite belong the way Becky does and asjdklajfa I am surprised you are not more upset by the Jin/Meisa backstory, because that was what I was mainly apologizing for b-but I figured if Meisa were to have one great love in this AU, it should at least be Jin? :X :X :X

(And ofc I needed to get in bits of your drabble because they are so inspiring and I love working around them to solidify the "canon" of this AU.)

And I figure Yuriko is not as fond of Mirei because she doesn't have the same bond with her (as she does with Yuko) and she takes the side of the misunderstood Jun/Satomi/Ohno. But also it may be that she sees some of herself in Mirei, too, so Mirei shouldn't act high and mighty or something.

♥♥♥ ILU.

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