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Fic: Bleach // A Certain Lack of Pretense

Mar 14, 2008 13:01

Title: A Certain Lack of Pretense
Characters: Izuru, Gin
Summary: Gin likes'm with a little fight.
Rating: PG-13ish?
Notes/Warnings: I may expand this the next time I feel like writing porn. Which is rare, but you never know. It may happen! Also, temp title. If I can ever think of a proper one. Feel free to offer suggestions.

( push him the right way and he'll bend until he breaks )

bleach, fic

Comments 9

mangust March 14 2008, 20:56:39 UTC

brilliant <3 Kira that is not a weak-weeping-idiotic-masohist deserves praising.

melpomene March 15 2008, 06:16:42 UTC

I am seriously so tired of weepy-girl-uke Kira that it's not funny.

minorcases March 14 2008, 20:56:42 UTC

oooh, this is so sinister and hot. i like this! :DDD

melpomene March 15 2008, 06:17:28 UTC

Thank you. :D

theacidqueen March 14 2008, 21:31:11 UTC

oh WOW. i LOVE your writing style. this is fabulous on so many levels. and your characterization...perfect. it just needs to be longer!

melpomene March 15 2008, 06:18:04 UTC

Thanks! And it will be, someday, hopefully.

bunnyfetishist March 14 2008, 23:30:05 UTC

Waaah I really really like your portrayal of Kira! It fits perfectly with his personality. I would love to see a longer version of it done!

melpomene March 15 2008, 06:19:43 UTC

Thank you. I really do think most people tend to forget about his temper and that bit of snobbishness he displayed during Academy, especially. Hopefully I'll be able to pull out an extended version at some point!

letainajup March 17 2008, 02:02:25 UTC

I really like how you wrote this, another version of Kira that I do enjoy! >D Great work, especially the biting parts ~ lol!