tell me when you leave

[melstars]

shall practise writing again.

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This is Love

This isn't love, as per say.
This is Love, with a capital L --
to make it offical.
This is plastic-coated Love,
moulded perfect,
breathtaking flawless.
Let people gape and envy.
This is Love on exhibition,
and we are the artists.

spot the ironical grammatical error :D

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[edit]
funny, i'm not feeling as depressed as

Comments

[mandity]

Yeah "it was nice while it lasted." -_-"
at least it wasn't for only a month zzz.

LET ME GUESS. THE TENSES? : o

[melstars]

NOPE. it has something to do with wrong use of word class :D okay lah i say. see anything wrong with "breathtaking flawless"?

[mandity]

WELL I thought it was fashion! HAHA. flawless can be a noun :D xD