This has probably been mentioned many times before, but your OC is pretty damn amazing. He's got a very distinct personality, and there's never a moment when you seem unsure about him, which just goes to show just how much work and thought you put into him. Thank you for sharing him with us at AD.
As for Ed. The way you have him trudging on and pushing forward despite everything? To me, that's very IC, but in a very game-specific way, so props.
And okay, this was more a spew love at rather than concrit thing... oops
I've only had the opportunity to interact with Hawk but I would like to agree with the anon above. Admittedly, I don't usually pay all that much attention to OCs unless they really catch my attention! He definitely seems like you've put a lot of thought and time into him so good job!
Hawke Starfyr || Original || golden_hawke
Edward Elric || Fullmetal Alchemist || saintedsinner
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Alphonse Elric || Fullmetal Alchemist || thesoulbound
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As for Ed. The way you have him trudging on and pushing forward despite everything? To me, that's very IC, but in a very game-specific way, so props.
And okay, this was more a spew love at rather than concrit thing... oops
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