arashi fiction 69 - whiskers of love

Jul 30, 2013 12:29

Title: The Many Definitions of Perfection
Pairing: Sho/Becky with hints of Jun/Nino and Aiba/Kanjiya Shihori
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Some rules are meant to be broken. AU. Sho and Becky work together, so they cannot be together.
Originally written for natsunonamae at je-whiteday

but why is it hairy? )

pairing: jun/nino, genre: romance, pairing: sho/becky, genre: fluff

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tangiblewhimsy July 31 2013, 03:37:58 UTC
I remember betaing this for you way back when. It's still soooo good! Guh.

I remember saying that I really liked Becky in this. She was super easy to relate to/identify with while still being her own character. I still love the scene where she's upset because of drinks with her friends making her cry and goes to just bask in the beauty that is Jun's face. IF IT WAS AN OPTION, I'D TOTALLY TAKE IT. *pets him like a creeper* I love how she's mostly aware of her feelings but is so resolute about sticking to her promise to herself that she doesn't even think about taking it seriously.

What I was really impressed with this time around, though, was Sho. He was perfect. I mean, the drunken attempt at confessing through art is and always will be adorable, but I think I really love him the most at the end when he doesn't interrupt her at all. He lets her talk and get her say out, and he understand. He might not fully understand the crazy behind it, but he knows that it's just a part of Becky and it's something about her that he likes along ( ... )

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nicefinalbeam August 1 2013, 13:40:55 UTC
Becky just seems like such a cool person. She loves celebrities and being around them, but at the end of the day she goes home and lounges in pajamas and has a pet tortoise. I wanted to capture the spirit of someone who is both a little silly and super professional. :D

Thank youuuu. I figured Sho is the type of person who might have difficulty confessing his feelings to a woman, but that doesn't necessarily mean he's stuck in a high school mentality or anything, you know? I needed him to be prince charming in this - with a touch of fail, as Sho does so well. ;D

Glad you like this story! ♥

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faiee July 31 2013, 04:30:29 UTC
this was such a cute story! and the picture!! /giggles

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nicefinalbeam August 1 2013, 13:36:27 UTC
Thank you! :D

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