Give me some of your own original lyrics, and then I'll try to use them in a song

Sep 22, 2004 04:04

I can't believe that you're wasting your time. I thought you could find your way back. You heard my story but heard it all wrong…not me. Well it’s just so little, and I can see through you and know it will end. This distance, this silence, this secret is seeping out my skin. I was over it before, but you brought me back to where I began. And I’m ( Read more... )

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I'm sorry, but that's all I got! warriorlove September 26 2004, 10:26:27 UTC
I am sooooo sorry Art. I just don't think I can come up with any great lyrics for you(I guess am not the only one!). I actually sat down and read all my poems and then brainstormed to try to get you some AWESOME lyrics, but I'm ashamed of all i that came up. I personally don't think I can even give you that great of lines without hearing the tunes and rhythm. I know I asked you what kind it was, but your answer was so blunt. COULD YOU BE ANY MORE CONFUSING! i can give you one line that isn't that great, but it is true to my heart( you probably won't need to use it, but here it is ( ... )

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they memari September 26 2004, 12:11:51 UTC
k, well my lyrics suck but here's a few ( ... )

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Re: they llama_yo_mama September 26 2004, 17:31:27 UTC
aww cc i love them! especially the first one...and no they dont suck!
"Looking at me, yoU see a companion,
but I look in yoUr direction,
and to my demise,
I find a lover which I will never have." that one is soo true in so many instences! awww!

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Lyrics anonymous September 26 2004, 23:26:38 UTC
I'm not sure if its poetic or pathetic, but if only these daunting thoughts of you would subdue these regrets, then maybe we can just be friends.

Thanks for everything. I would take it all back in heart beat, if I had one.

Its better this way?

Your comments were so carefully constructed, coated with cancer. How can you live with yourself?

I'll never forget you, just like my first funeral.

I gave you my love, and you said there never was.

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Re: Lyrics anonymous October 14 2004, 23:51:17 UTC
oh my goth!

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well, you chose it for me anonymous September 29 2004, 21:20:16 UTC
hi everyone, remember me? former mock king turned bio major at baylor. Well welcome to the random thoughts of my wandering brain.

ever so unfulfilled, took the gun and went to kill, corporate man so unknowing, felt the bullet and saw blood flowing.

Mindless words with no beginning
A silent proposal leaves head spinning
One bright flicker in Satan's eye
Dulls the lure of righteousness cry

Walk along in a facade of heaven
God abundant
But faith untended
Drop the white vail
drive the next nail
Sodom arises 'cause we have failed

Rotten heart leaves me restless,
Wish the guilty were left faceless,
Thief stood right in bright white light
Face takes shape with betrayals fate.

Well none of the stanzas are actually related. Im sorry, I can do better. Nevertheless, this is some of what i have jotted down in my little room.

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Re: well, you chose it for me memari October 4 2004, 22:04:33 UTC
aww is it my dear friend and former sumo wrestling patrick?!?! cuz I have a hunch there's a monkey afoot!

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