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[menaoer]

Waking up abruptly and completely lost, a young boy seventeen years old slowly opened his eyes, wondering why he was in a complete stranger’s room. He took a deep breath before images of the night before, spent with the man still next to him, came to his mind, making the hairs of his forearms shiver. The teen looked at his watch, his eyes widening

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[ichigochancake]

To be honest, I have no clue why I read this seeing as OnKey isn't really my thing but I'm happy I did! I think you just converted me into a OnKey-shipper. Canit wait for the next chapter! ♥

[ichigochancake]

First? :DDD

[menaoer]

Ahah, yeah! You're first! Thank you a lot for your comment ;P
I'm so happy I just converted you into a Onkey-shipper, after all that's why I'm writing xD I'm a Onkey-shipper too soo mouahah. The next chapter will come soon, hope you'll like it! <3

[lily_ina]

Okay, I don't know if you'll believe me, but I've been waiting for this fic! I even re-read the prologue not so long ago! (It was long searching for it since I only remembered the story, not the title ^^'')

Thank you so much for updating! You write so well!!

I think you got yourself a faithful reader~ I'll be sure to read the next chapters!

I hope you'll be able to update soon! :)

[menaoer]

Awww, thank you so much for your comment, it's so nice to know that people where re-reading the prologue ahah, I hope that at least, that first chapter was okay to you so you won't stop reading it xD. Thought all of this, I try to put as much effort as I can to make it look real! Thank you to you for commenting ahahah.

If it wasn't of my beta reader, I wouldn't be writing that well, after all, she gives me lots of advices when I write and she corrects my errors so ... brightly mouahah, yeah I am praising you lazy, you can be happy xD

I'll update soon I promise, thanks another time for reading!! <3

[ilove_chicken]

I love fics like this, with a lot of characters and a lot of drama.
I'm already waiting for the next chapter o(^_^)o

[menaoer]

Aww, thank you for your comment!!
If you love fic with lots of Characters and Drama ... you're welcome in my world ahah. I am planing of doing the third characters sheet soon, be there to check on it ahaha!

I hope you'll like the next chapter too mouahah.
For the drama, it's already start, so just imagine later ;P

Thanks another time for your comment <3

[yuz0308]

annyoeng !!!
new here.....

poor kibum n taemin....
hope jinki n minho can cure them ^^

'bout d last paragraph of this chapter,
is d young boy kibum ???
n d stranger jinki ???

update soon ^^

[menaoer]

Annyeong!! Maraeso bangapsumnida!
Thanks for being a new reader in here ahah! It always makes me happy! : D

Yep it is ;P Kibum just can't sleep alone since habitually a customer is sleeping by his side! So ... he just tried to find something warm and the only thing in the room was Jinki! :O Though ... Onew's not better his reaction, even if he was asleep was to put his arms around him ahahah.

I'll update soon!! Thanks another time for your comment! <3

[yuz0308]

jinki's insting maybe ???
he... he... ;p

[njrv16]

Ohh yay!!! you updated :D
I remembered reading the prologue a LONG time ago and it had really catch my attention so now I'm really exited to know that you continued it.

I really like the plot for this so patiently I'll wait for updates :D , especially with that ending ;)

[menaoer]

Awww, I'm really happy to see that you're another long time reader mouahah. I didn't think my fic would catch so many eyes :O, but thank you very much for commenting another time ;P

Ahah, yeah a LONG time ago! >< But don't worry, this time I'll try to do it faster! And I already have a page for my second chapter, it will come faster than this one .. I hope ahahah!

I'm happy that the plot interest you so much xD Don't worry another time, there will be an ending to it one day :P
Thank you !! <3