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Nov 29, 2009 18:31

“Key! Key! Kim Kibum, I am talking to you!”

Slowly turning his head to the side, the young boy looked up at the person through his drugged daze. “…What do you want?” Kibum said in a tired tone, waving his hand as the drugs’ effect finally started to leave his body after the beginning of his Friday night. It was now three in the morning, and he ( Read more... )

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lily_ina November 30 2009, 03:15:14 UTC
SPOOOT!! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HAPPY YOU POSTED THIS ESPECIALLY AFTER I DID TWO 20 PAGES ESSAYS IN 1 WEEK!!!!

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lily_ina November 30 2009, 04:27:14 UTC
I think that was the best text I read in a long long time... :')

Ah! It's nice to see a different kind of Onew in this fic! And the story seems kind of realistic even if it's super angsty! (I find it funny that your header has bright colors and an elephant and the fic I read is about prostitution and drugs...Am I a bad person? o.o)

Anyway I loved it!! I hope you'll be able to update soon!! I could wait months for the next chapter as long as I get to read it someday! (But sooner would make me happy too XD)

[HEY! I saw your birthday is this week! On December 1st? OH! My favourite day of the year! I love you! 8D]

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menaoer November 30 2009, 13:11:36 UTC
Awww, thank you so much !!! <3

Ahah, I try to make Jinki different yeah, in fact I don't want him to be a really happy snugger yet and with everything going on in his life, I don't feel it would be the perfect temper for him xD And ahahaha, I know that's what I thought before about my banner too >< But I'm a pretty happy person even if I write those things mouahah, so I think it's just keeping my mood up each time I am posting something like this xD You're not a bad person, don't worry ahah (L)(L)

Ahah, thank you another time, I'll try to update soon, I promise (Yeah right, other time I said that I didn't update before 2months T_T at least, I'll try this time xD)

Aish, I hope you will have good marks on your essays !! (L) Seriously, 20 pages x 2 = 40 pages T__T Poooor you ! xD

[Mouahah, yeahhh my birthday is .. TOMORROW ahah, I'll be 17, wouaw, happy birthday to meeee and ahah what about your favorite day of the year?! :O Ahaha why that ?<3]

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lily_ina November 30 2009, 17:24:53 UTC
Yeah...Jinki couldn't be all happy and everything with the life he has now...

Elephants always bright up people's mood! :D And take your time to update! I don't want you to feel rushed or anything!

Yeah...2 essays on two subjects I didn't like much...Archeology is so boring you don't even know and History of timekeeping devices is not that bad but I would have needed so many more pages D: 20 was so not enough! But I'm glad it's over now...

[HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! *hugs* :D Woah 17! You're younger than me by a year! I'm 18!

It's my favourite day because my mother always decorated for Christmas on December 1st and they start playing Christmas song on the radio! :) AND IT SNOWED LAST NIGHT!!! IT'S STILL SNOWING TOO!!! THE WEATHER IS WISHING YOU A HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! 8D ]

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juphen November 30 2009, 03:15:20 UTC
well yeah it's kinda long time to update
OMO...Kibum has been druged?? how would he be for the next day?
Jinki is mean, too much pride on his shoulder to carry on

UPDATE SOON!!!!

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menaoer November 30 2009, 13:14:16 UTC
Awww, ahah, I know T__T
Long time like long long long time, aish I'm a bad writer for updating months after xD
Yes he had been drugged! Ahah, you will see the next day in the next chapter mouahah, how Jinki and Kibym will react to each other mouahahahah (L)
But like you said, Jinki IS mean, he has to much things to take care to and can't really let himself go.

I'll try to update sooon !!!
Ahah, thanks for your comment <3

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juphen December 2 2009, 13:46:34 UTC
well the way you reply me is that you give me some hint in the next chapter?? **wink**
you got me think bout some scene (jinki/key's reation)
or me just being pervie ha3x..

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menaoer December 9 2009, 22:30:26 UTC
Ahahah, sorry for the late reply ><

But yeah xDD Mouahaah you'll see 'maybe' some onkey interaction in the next chapter but I can't say more xD You ARE a pervie because there won't be anything like that, though .. ahah, no it's a secret, believe me it's better like that : DD

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mankadi November 30 2009, 05:25:49 UTC
at least im no.3 :)
yay u finally updated new chapter!! xD

im gonna read it @@

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mankadi November 30 2009, 06:05:54 UTC
i love it!! <33
so goood!!really one of the best fic i ever read!!

"What a joke, with that face he couldn’t even scare a rabbit!"
hahah totally true =P

anyway please update soon..
i cant wait for next chapter!!!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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menaoer November 30 2009, 13:16:07 UTC
Aww, I'm so happy you love it : DDDD
Ahah you should stop praising me like that <3
And I'm sooo sorry about not answering you PM, I had forgotten about it, tsss T__T

xDD Yeah, and it's true, you look at Taemin and just say: aish this guy is sooo cute ahah who could be afraid of him?! xD

I'll try to update soon : DDD
Ahah thank you a lot for your comment (L)(L)

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mankadi November 30 2009, 15:24:18 UTC
HAHAH :)
but u deserve those praising!! :P
ohh its ok.. i frogot too.. X_X

hes way too innocent.. i love hiiim! <33

hahah u welcome bb <3
please read my 2min fic.. i dont remember if you read

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901younha108 November 30 2009, 09:19:58 UTC
yah..i thought this was forgetten to update..im sorry to think that way..but please continue this please...this is so GOOD...THE BEST PLOT..STORY SO PLEASE CONTINUE..im waiting for the next..don't make it another months to update..just kidding..take your time.ok..

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menaoer November 30 2009, 21:54:47 UTC
Ahah, I will never forget to update this fic (L)
In fact I have sooo much fun writing it xD
The correction part is another thing ><
Aww thanks about the best plot thing, but how could Onkey and 2Min not make a good plot? It's like .. impossible : OOO xD
I'll try to post soon, thanks another time for your comment !! <3

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901younha108 December 1 2009, 01:58:11 UTC
hey..I read this again..I can't get over..I'm addicted..I am like want to see more..ahaha..

oh last night i was redaing this and you know I'm assuming the next chapters..I am guessing what will happen next and it make go crazy thinking so many ideas..hahaha..this is so great really..

oh I was thinking could there be a jongkey also..ahhaha..oh sorry I forgot to reread the profle but just asking..and I'm also thinking of a minkey..i am like loving the couple of minbho and key..I don't why but I find them cute..but i'm onkey 4ever..but I'm just hoping there will be..but still 2min is there..oh am i leading this so some sort of dispute between umma and son..I'm sorry ..but it's possible ahaha..

ok enough..

wanna tell you I love this..and I'm your fan from now on..!

hwaiting..

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 14:20:42 UTC
WOW I was so happy when I saw this updated I actually thought that something bad had happened since you didn't updated in a long long time.

But I'm so glad you did (yes!! the fic was not forgotten)
The story it's getting really good, i like the plot a lot and the way you characterize Jinki and Kibum. I fell so bad for Kibum getting drugged but it's part of the job.

I'll be waiting for the next chappie!!!! XD ohh and for some reason I love the last line

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menaoer December 1 2009, 17:41:42 UTC
Awww, I'm so glad you were happy about me updating : DDD I know I didn't update in a long time, but i's better now than never neih?! : DDD And thank you so much for your comment : D

xDD No, I'll never forget about this Fanfic. I love it so much myself mouahah (L) I just can't abandon it, it'S a part of me right now : D Ahah, I'm trying to put everything I can in this story, and Onkey is the best couple on earth (L) Who couldn't love them after all, I try to make them different ^^

Ahhah, wait for the next chapter yeah, I'll try to post it as soon as I can! Mouah, the last line like, the RUN and AAF one or the last line of the chapter?! : DD

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njrv16 December 1 2009, 19:54:11 UTC
The Run and AAF one ^_^

And yes Onkey is without doubt the best couple on earth

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menaoer December 1 2009, 20:03:48 UTC
Ohh ahah, thanks ;P Umm the Run is from a movie; Boys Love 2 : D
And the other is from me mouahahah (L)

ONKEY FIGHTING !!! (L)(L)(L)

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