Bleach fanfic -- Our Reply to Violence (PG)

[menelvir]

Title: Our Reply to Violence
Author: menelvir
Fandom: Bleach
Genre: Angst, music, catharsis
Rating: PG
Characters/ Pairings: Hitsugaya Toushirou, Hinamori Momo, Unohana Retsu
Warnings/ Spoilers: No spoilers, except unless you haven't finished the Soul Society arc.
Words: 1610
Summary: Hitsugaya finds a way to reach Hinamori across the latter's comatose
Disclaimer

Comments

[vayshti]

The set up was lovely. I had to keep slowing myself down to read properly, so badly did I want to know what was in the box.

A song fic with a real difference.

I'll happily admit I'm a little teary now.

xx

[menelvir]

Haha, sorry to have kept up the suspense. And sorry to make you feel sad. And on the flip-side, thanks for reading and reviewing~~ Reviews make me as happy as a kid in a candy store. =)

[aranellaerien]

la~ you're getting quite technical, you know. =P Yea, you might want to take note so it doesn't detract from the main plot; it's just that "is this about how to play a song, about some emotions or is there a storyline somewhere" syndrome. Alright, probably I simply don't know enough of the fandom, so you've to forgive me. Anyhow, i guess i just haven't been reading anything Asian for a while, so it feels as though the work could have been fleshed out more, or perhaps break away from the more typical formats - I'm just having a feeling there's much more you're feeling, there's much more you can put in, but somehow you have not penned it all down.

P.S. Little F(ire) Wood's throwing another tantrum. He's been busy touring people's homes, cars and vans - basically, anyone who knows how to take care of him and doesn't mind him dancing along. Think he's gonna get very homesick.....

[menelvir]

Heh, you're right about there being more to it. I cut about a thousand words, all describing the comatose girl's nightmare. Took it out because I didn't think it was doing as much for the plot as I wanted it to, and because it wasn't consistent with the theme. And this is kind of rushed too... Because I really should be studying. Lalala...

Err... Could Mr. Wood wait two weeks? I'll be more free to bring him home and give him a nice exercise then...

[aranellaerien]

Heh. See, your writing reveals much more than you might have realised. =P Study, study, study! It's fun, you know? Alright, I really should study too, but *we all deserve a break.....* =P

Haha. I'll get him to be nice. Meanwhile, he's lounging in a nice, airy condo near Yio Chu Kang (yes, I went there personally and yes, it's less humid than my place, and on a greater elevation = he gets the S'pore equivalent of mountain air =P). And I'll give him a bath this sat, so he should be well-humoured till you pick him up. =)