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Mensa AU Fic Exchange: "Where There are Clouds" for jade_1459

Apr 24, 2008 19:40

Title: Where There are Clouds
Author: thisissirius
Pairing/Characters: Rod/Mensa!John; Mensa!Kavanagh
Setting: MENSA-verse
Rating: PG
Word count: 3, 373 words
Notes: I hope this everything that you wanted. I tried to blend the three fics in together, but also make them very different. I hope that works for you  enjoy!
Warnings: mentions of torture
Recipient: jade_1459 ( Read more... )

fic exchange, universe: mensa, author: thisissirius, pair: mensa!john/rodney

Comments 8

mellyna April 24 2008, 20:16:42 UTC

Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.

thisissirius May 2 2008, 17:20:39 UTC

thank you very much!

shaddyr April 24 2008, 22:26:05 UTC

Ooo! I like this!

thisissirius May 2 2008, 17:21:14 UTC

thank you very much :)

jade_1459 April 25 2008, 04:38:50 UTC

Oh my god... Oh My GOD!

This was made of complete awesome!

I loved the way you wrote the character voices, they sounded real to me, like this might actually be an episode that might possibly air should we ever meet the Mensa-verse again.

The story line, and they you broke it up were great. I liked how you gave the little background details through out, without really giving them away (because I still really what happened between John and Rod to make John believe that they were both better without a romantic/intimate relationship -- but I can think of a few interesting senarios!).

And just loved - loved - that moment between Teyla and the scientist (“I think you should know something.” She let the blade slide across his skin and then raised an eyebrow at the rest. “I lied.”). And medical Doctor Kav was way cool!

And I really need to stop gushing on like this. But thank you! This was a great story.

*loves*
Jade

thisissirius May 2 2008, 17:24:15 UTC

*blush*

thank you, and you are quite, quite welcome.

(because I still really what happened between John and Rod to make John believe that they were both better without a romantic/intimate relationship -- but I can think of a few interesting senarios!)

what are the senarios? maybe i'll take one up ;)

omg i love that moment, too! possible one of my favourite :)

anonymous April 29 2008, 02:50:03 UTC

Fantastic story. I loved the subtle differences, particularly Kav, who I've always secretly liked. Also, the angst. There's never enough, and then the squishy ending with a hint of outing, yay!

(anon due to being an author in the poll)

thisissirius May 2 2008, 17:22:40 UTC

thank you very much! I don't think that Kavanagh is as much of an asshole as people make out, so yeah ;)

SQUISHY ENDING :D