Comments | mentalistecbm: be a man (mysterious as the dark side of the moon)

mentalistecbm

be a man (mysterious as the dark side of the moon)

Sep 19, 2011 19:17

so it was somebody's birthday and i have these fantastically terrible things to kind of gift her with -- seriously, they are terrible, i have no fucking idea what i was thinking, but i really did try and i'll, uh, i don't know.

first:

title: i will suck out your soul til there is nothing left
summary: He's bitter and he's jaded and hell, he ( Read more... )

darling, harry fuck-me harry, why i should never choose the titles, jesus save my soul, fic, harry/draco, post-war

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imprintofadream September 19 2011, 23:44:27 UTC

Oh. I. Betsy. I, just, oh.
I read this in class because I can't help myself when it comes to your words and can't properly think, but Godric what your words do. Will be reading fifteen times over again and commenting proper with emotion, you hear?

mentalistecbm September 23 2011, 20:05:59 UTC

i hear, yes.

thank you, darling.

phoenixnoor September 20 2011, 10:46:25 UTC

love love love

mentalistecbm September 23 2011, 20:06:13 UTC

thank you thank you thank you.

dulcemia September 21 2011, 03:15:38 UTC

And then there's that moment, that ripe, cutting, moment, when you first happen to stumble across a ficcer of talent unbeknownst to you until that fortunate accident and it's like a small, perfect blow to the solar plexus.

earth_magic September 21 2011, 09:18:55 UTC

I have to second this. You got me the moment you said about the Dementors still being in the walls.

mentalistecbm September 23 2011, 20:08:34 UTC

i got you the first sentence? well, then. that's pretty fucking awesome.

thank you.

mentalistecbm September 23 2011, 20:06:58 UTC

oh my gosh, thank you! that's seriously very kind of you, it is.

altri_uccelli September 21 2011, 12:58:03 UTC

Wow. So many little hits in here that add up to a huge punch. I love the mood here, the characterization, Harry at odds with the powers that be, Draco unbroken. How they are together--sure, unapologetic, intense--kind of echoes the delicacy and toughness of your writing. You did a TON here in a short space, but I could easily read 20K more of this.

mentalistecbm September 23 2011, 20:26:33 UTC

oh, it's always nice to hear that my characterization is nice, it really is. i don't even know what's going on with the mood, ha, but cool.

and thank you about all of this, really.

geneva2010 September 21 2011, 13:59:27 UTC

I can't see the photo as it is friends locked, but the picture you painted was as good as any photo. Better. I remember an artwork with Draco naked on Harry's lap, obviously just out of Azkaban and smoking. You brought it back to mind so vividly. I love how Harry laments Draco's shaved head and admires him at the same time.

mentalistecbm September 22 2011, 03:45:12 UTC

that picture gives me so many emotions, yeah. but i'm sorry, i'd forgotten that she'd flocked it a bit ago.

thank you for commenting!