Comments | mentalistecbm: fic: there are pieces of my mind (harry/draco, WIP)

mentalistecbm

fic: there are pieces of my mind (harry/draco, WIP)

Sep 25, 2011 02:25

title: there are pieces of my mind
summary: These are the things that he remembers. He doesn't always wish that he did.
rating: going to say R, but this is a WIP so not definite
word count: ~3297
disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters and ideas herein are the property of JKR and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
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Comments 18

badjujuboo September 25 2011, 11:48:39 UTC

oh HOW I LOVE YOUR WORDS!

The past moments are so emotional. I really think thats an area of Harry's life we don't know that much about but everything you've shown so far I can see occuring. Luna is brilliant in this as well as Hermione. Harry's empty, hollowness is heartbreaking and you've captured that brilliantly.

again, your words. Love them. *eagerly awaits the next installment*

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 03:59:19 UTC

oh, thank you! things like this are always really awesome to hear, they are, and i am very glad that you're enjoying.

i like scarring harry, i can't help it; he's already so deliciously fucked-up in every way.

darkjediqueen September 25 2011, 14:14:31 UTC

This was really really good. I can't wait for more.

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 03:59:56 UTC

thank you, darling. ♥♥♥

billeh_n_dommeh September 26 2011, 00:41:53 UTC

Omg! This is amazing. And I love the interaction between Harry and Teddy. It's exactly how I'd imagine he'd be.

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 04:00:25 UTC

seriously? well, cool! ha, thanks.

beatlemaniac9 September 26 2011, 04:39:57 UTC

AWWW the end of this chapter is adorable!

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 04:00:47 UTC

thank you ever so much.

cheryl_tunt September 26 2011, 04:57:52 UTC

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
sfldkjsadflkjsfd ugh Harry you poor angel ugh I just want to hug him and stroke his hair because he is seriously the epitome of the kid who got the shit end of the stick and oh God how it goes from past to present and DUDLEY and Petunia's funeral like omg

I cannot wait for more, seriously.

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 04:04:21 UTC

so it's safe to assume that you liked it? ;D

DUDE, the entire fucking series is about how shitty harry's life is, though. because it is and just ugh, i love him so much.

DUDLEY.

thank you.

cheryl_tunt October 8 2011, 04:13:09 UTC

UM YES I LOVED IT

and ugh I know like omg poor baby his life and how it is literally never good except for bits and pieces and then he has to sacrifice himself so many times throughout the series and how he never wanted this to happen and people die and oh God, it's so heartbreaking ugh. And omg your Dudley was so perfect like I never really hated Dudders because he was just a product of his upbringing and it just shows that Vernon and Petunia were really crappy people and OMG CAN WE TALK ABOUT HOW HARRY IS TOTALLY WILLING TO FORGIVE DUDLEY FOR THE YEARS OF BULLYING JUST BECAUSE DUDLEY WAS LIKE, "YOU WEREN'T SO BAD" LIKE OH GOD HARRY MY BABY and omg this was beautiful and fsjgjsdfjksfkd

mentalistecbm October 8 2011, 19:39:18 UTC

how do you even exist oh my gosh you flattering person, you.

i hate vernon and petunia so much, holy Jesus. IT WAS SO ENJOYABLE WRITING HER FUNERAL. HARRY IS WILLING TO FORGIVE BECAUSE HARRY IS JUST FLAWLESS AND BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE HIM SO VERY MUCH.

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