Ten Trains

Jan 09, 2012 05:56


title: Ten Trains
pairing: changmin/jessica.
genre: romance
summary: ten train rides, one hundred and sixty-seven words.
a/n: based off of (this) pretty little poem.
and they both just sat there and listened to each other breathe. )

pairing: changmin/jessica, fandom: dbsk, fandom: snsd

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mekimigure January 11 2012, 04:58:58 UTC
Oh my gosh.
When I read this, I just couldn't help thinking how gentle it is. The fact that both of them only have 167 words is subtly tragic and the ending - And he slowly began to whisper I love you thirty-two and a third times.
I'm so amazed and unashamed to gush over this lovely piece.

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meonmi January 11 2012, 23:42:30 UTC
Thank you so much! This is my first time writing a fanfic, so I'm glad that it got the feelings I wanted for it to have.

Much thanks!

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mekimigure January 11 2012, 23:52:43 UTC
You are too good for your first time. ^^
I really enjoyed reading this oneshot!

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wintercreamed January 11 2012, 07:00:59 UTC
This is so pretty! The mood gives off this light and happy rhythm, the words come out as real. Love it! Love the everything about it! <3

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meonmi January 11 2012, 23:43:10 UTC
Thank you very much (: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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violetrosie January 12 2012, 03:56:12 UTC
This is absolutely beautiful and ChangSica is one of my favorite couples. I'm so happy you wrote them, as not that many people seem to anymore. Thanks for a wonderful piece ♥

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meonmi January 12 2012, 04:30:10 UTC
Thank you, everyone is so sweet! :)
I'm secretly shipping Changsica, hahaha. I went from Changyoon to Changsica. (still ship Changyoon with a passion) i've noticed that a lot! It used to be such a big deal back in the days.

You're welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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falsefallacy January 14 2012, 13:11:33 UTC
This is beautiful. Definitely beautiful. And I'm saying this as a non-ChangSica shipper! //total loss of words

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meonmi January 15 2012, 07:38:53 UTC
Oh wow, really? Thank you oh so very much!

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lettherebeminho February 29 2012, 23:54:34 UTC
Someone recommended I read this and I'm glad they did because it's definitely moving and I enjoyed every word of it. Thanks for this.

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meonmi March 2 2012, 03:43:35 UTC
Are you serious? Thank you, and you're welcome!

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