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meowzy_chan

The Ultimate Yuan Biography

Jan 29, 2020 11:15

I did it. I so did it. After a year of procrastinating and being generally lazy, I completed my ultimate Yuan biography. This thing is exactly 10 Word pages long and consists of loads of tl;dr, complete with pointless tidbits nobody but the hardcore fans would even remotely care about ( Read more... )

yuan, tales of symphonia

Comments 30

typophsyco February 24 2009, 03:27:42 UTC

As if it were possible for me to love you more.

You have defied the laws of physics.

Again.

You are amazing.

meowzy_chan February 24 2009, 13:43:53 UTC

Screw physics. I never get good grades for that anyway.

darksolez March 6 2009, 20:18:42 UTC

Finally, I've had the time to read this properly! As I expected, it's a comprehensive and well-written analysis of Yuan, and I certainly learned a lot. Not only that, but it clarified and organised what I already knew about him, and thus you should be very proud.
I did spot a few errors when it comes to grammar/spelling, so I'll just point them out. For perfection, you see..

-"Quick to raise his defensive". "Defensive"'s an adjective, so it doesn't sit well with me, or the sentence, here.
-"claiming that they’re both his friends". This would be better if you said "they WERE both his friends".

I also like that while you keep it serious and in-depth, you injected some elements of humour too. Great job.

meowzy_chan March 6 2009, 20:22:52 UTC

Thank you, Solez! I'm always glad to hear compliments like this from you, because I know they're heartfelt.

I thought that "were" wouldn't be appropriate in that sentence, because otherwise it'd be implying that they used to be Genis' friends. But considering the whole synopse was past tense, I just wasn't sure.

darksolez March 6 2009, 20:28:47 UTC

Everything I say to you is heartfelt. You're welcome. "Were" is correct, but I do see your concern, yeah.

alices_soulmate May 10 2010, 16:10:21 UTC

Because I'm too lazy to leave my RP account, I'm just letting you know that is is still love and that I'm rereading it. <3

meowzy_chan May 10 2010, 16:11:40 UTC

F-ffff... Thanks. ^^

luminitrium August 27 2010, 15:34:02 UTC

This will assist me in my future characterization of Yuan. <3 I loved how you got every detail down on here, it certainly is helpful and totally awesome man! (also a definitely must-need for every dedicated Yuan fan out there :3)

serpentofheart August 25 2011, 00:23:20 UTC

>"While I didn't go in-depth into his role and personality (*g-gag*)..."

Stop implying ToS2!Yuan had a personality, Meowzy. 8|

Also I'm going to use this as reference every time I write a fic with Yuan in it. 'cause it's amazing. Fuck yeah. \o/